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At dawn when yo blazed my heart to boil, love shrived up our hearts like leaves blown to fall on each other, like adjourned twins glued to quiver for each other, we burn love sacrifice in our paradise garden

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/19/2011 8:37:00 AM
Couple of typos in there, nicely written without overstepping the mark. Well done.
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Elizabeth Lepapa
Date: 8/19/2011 2:47:00 PM
I appreciate your comment nick. Hope you keep reading as your encouragement and correction drive me.love

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