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Horse Dream

Wealth dreams of sunshine, as I gallop through fields, welcome is the rain endless sea of amber it yields. Through sea of fresh, clean, golden wheat, new dried fodder stored for the livestock to eat. I'm constantly told, I am a magnificent looking animal; I'm a horse, which it's clearly understandable. My owner pats me a few times, talks in a calm and soothing voice to let me know that I can trust them; I still have a choice. They brush me down removing thoroughly of dirt and mud, brushing my mane and tail, until I'm a ravishing stud. When all is done, they extend a hand placing a treat close to my muzzle as I bubble in calm delight over my sweet. 3/8/2020

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Date: 3/19/2020 5:18:00 PM
Like your use of personification with this poem. In the mind of a horse...very interesting. Wonder what the thought process really is? Mr. Ed is back again?
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Date: 3/12/2020 5:59:00 AM
Terrific personification poem my friend!
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Date: 3/9/2020 7:02:00 PM
what a wonderful way you took this challenge, Eve. Very well done.
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Date: 3/9/2020 11:47:00 AM
Personification to the nth. Well done Eve...
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Date: 3/9/2020 11:38:00 AM
Eve, lovely, oh this brought me back through the years to my childhood horse, this is a winner for me and a FAV_Constance
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Date: 3/9/2020 5:02:00 AM
Such beautiful creatures Eve, I like how you discribed the life of a horse. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 3/9/2020 12:42:00 AM
Beautifully crafted poem.. Nice personification.. You took the contest to a different level.. Good luck Eve..
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