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Hope Lives

I can never get enough of you and that confident smile as your wit encases my mood you're an afternoon splash of fervor a gleam out off in the seas a hope that's suddenly excited the tide rushing in with each beat a toast to the moon and the sunlight a laugh in the favourable breeze aimlessly we float with each other when life doesn't always breathe peace I can never get enough of you as your blues look straight into mine so I remind you each day you are beautiful and offer you all of my time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/28/2018 11:47:00 PM
Love your romantic love, Tim.. hugs Eve
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Date: 6/27/2018 9:19:00 AM
She sounds lovely! Pretty personified.
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Date: 6/27/2018 12:47:00 AM
Even I wish I could meet this Hope, she is something special!!! Great write!
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Date: 6/26/2018 8:37:00 PM
Beautifully pen.. romance drips from your skilled pen!
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Date: 6/26/2018 6:28:00 PM
So romantic, Tim. I adored that last stanza, "as your blues look straight into mine"
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Date: 6/26/2018 3:35:00 PM
Flawless in beauty....
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Date: 6/26/2018 3:14:00 PM
A very sweet poem Tim..Loved it
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Date: 6/26/2018 2:32:00 PM
aww sweet
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Date: 6/26/2018 9:51:00 AM
I like the flow of thoughts here. Quite melodious. :)
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Date: 6/26/2018 8:23:00 AM
Sweetness! :) xomo
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Date: 6/26/2018 7:12:00 AM
aww so beautiful and romantic Tim:-) a joy to read this glorious summer afternoon:-) hugs Jan xx
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