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I can hear the horses snorting, outside my bedroom window, Even though it comes, from so many years ago; Cotton from the cottonwoods flying through the air, Making whitened dapples on my palomino mare; The hounds are all out baying, it must be dinner time; In my tiny little neighborhood, I was never scared of crime; Family surrounded me, aunts and uncles all around, It was quiet on our little street, no sirens made a sound; My cousins and I would play outlaws, and we’d hide out for a day; Making mighty forts from the fifty tons of hay; It never really changed much, as I grew up through the years, And remembering that it’s gone, always brings me close to tears. (My Parents sold the house I grew up in last year - It still breaks my heart)

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Date: 3/17/2011 9:09:00 AM
Such a hear-felt rendering dear Tirzah. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations Tirzah on your win in the "A Change of View" contest sponsored by Michael J. Falotico. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2011 6:39:00 AM
Wonderful memories Tirzah, quite sad that the house was sold.. Congratulations on your win in the contest ;)
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:47:00 PM
Wonderful poem, wonderful memories, such truth about the old days, so sad the house was sold. wonderful reading this, Tirzah. congrats. Harry
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Date: 3/16/2011 7:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this great write!! Memories are the hardest to sell or lose. Caryl
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Date: 3/16/2011 3:20:00 PM
Lovely memories make lovely poems. congratulations Tirzah. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/16/2011 2:33:00 PM
I remember this wonderful poem. What state were you in again? Congratulations, Tirzah.
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Date: 3/16/2011 2:26:00 PM
Congrats Tirzah on your wonderful win in Michael's contest with this exciting entry my friend.. enjoy your sweet success and top ten win with luv.. hope u are doing fine..luv..
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Date: 3/16/2011 2:20:00 PM
If I'd grown up in a place where there was no crime and you had horses, I don't think I could have left, Tirzah. So sorry your parents sold this house. Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/16/2011 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Michael, Tirzah
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Date: 3/16/2011 1:52:00 PM
Congrats to you on your success in my contest.. Thank you...always Michael
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Date: 3/1/2011 1:49:00 PM
Oh,my , I know just how you feel, our family home sold five years ago! I love this, tirzah. heartfelt and lovely poem.
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Date: 3/1/2011 9:33:00 AM
Life is still the same and no change of scene, that is good life one craves for..Tirzah Good luck in the contest,
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