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antiquated it sits collecting dust amidst memories threadbare piece of cloth unraveling with time I cleek it from the drawer press it against my heart then stare blankly at its threads unraveling the years I can almost see you adept hands carefully knitting each little thread in place then carefully tying the knot I grimace in pain the writhe of my stomach twisting about as I trace each thread the same as the tears sketch my face to hold you once more in more than confine's of mind seems as impossible as tossing this tattered cloth that brings me solace through the threads of time May 13, 2020

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Date: 5/27/2020 1:09:00 AM
You will never forget this person ( presume it was you mother) Sandy 'I can almost see you the writhe of my stomach twisting as i trace each thread the same as the tears sketch my face' Memories of her will always abound however painful they are, they also bring joy. Many congrat on your 1st win. Blessings, Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/20/2020 6:43:00 AM
Absolutely top notch! Many congrats on this magnificent #1, dear Sandara. ~ Elaine
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Date: 5/19/2020 10:54:00 PM
elegantly weaved Sandra...great writing
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Date: 5/18/2020 11:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 5/18/2020 11:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 5/18/2020 10:16:00 PM
This is such a loving read that brings back memories. Congratulations on your win Sandra :)
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Date: 5/18/2020 9:00:00 PM
A beautifully composed bittersweet longing, missing one whose love will never fade as the years pass Sandra. Congratulations on your awesome Trophy win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/18/2020 6:40:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Sandy, I enjoyed reading this wonderful verse again. Stay safe my friend. Hugs, John
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Date: 5/18/2020 5:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Oh Yes, the memories from old potholders. I still have a couple of them. Enjoy your win and day.............
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Date: 5/14/2020 9:27:00 PM
Poignantly stitched with the tears of time and memory. Elegant piece! :) gw
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Date: 5/14/2020 11:54:00 AM
Such touching memories of your grandmother, Sandy, I can feel the emotions in each line. Beautiful poetry my friend. Hugs, John
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Date: 5/14/2020 7:09:00 AM
Such a beautiful piece of poetry here, sweet lady. God bless you always - with much Love ~ Gina
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Date: 5/13/2020 4:06:00 PM
Another impressive write Sandy, nice to see you posting, hope you are well, coping as best as one can these days!
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Date: 5/13/2020 8:25:00 AM
Strange how a song or an object can open that treasure trove of happy memories. Those cherished memories stay with you forever. Hope you're well Tom
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Sandra Adams
Date: 5/13/2020 12:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom...I am well just trying to free my mind from the world's darkness and let my muse break free from the shadows that cover it … hope you are well... hugs :)
Date: 5/13/2020 7:29:00 AM
I feel the emotional connection you have with the tattered cloth, as you say, my friend. Certainly a brilliant write evoking cherished memories. Who won't be able to relate to such mementos we treasure in our hearts. All the attributes of a winning write, Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 5/13/2020 12:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay...I am glad the message came through with the emotions... you know me and my poetry, they try to take you there...hope you are well... hugs

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