Hmmm

Is that writhing really a dance Or does he have ants in his pants You have the answer perchance He’s taking his Can Can to France!

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Tayler Malark

Date: 11/21/2010 2:38:00 PM

I love the Can Can. This peice is funny.

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/6/2010 6:52:00 AM

like this peace my friend thank you for sharing duncan

John Freeman

Date: 9/16/2010 7:40:00 AM

LOL! Yep I've witnesses some of these dances. Smile! A cute Monorhyme Diane. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 9/10/2010 4:37:00 PM

The Can Can is quite a dance, Oo La La. Humourous Monorhyme Diane >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/9/2010 1:16:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup..enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. soup offers many contests on site.. there is one called DANCE ..check them out and enter..and good luck with luv..

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/9/2010 12:22:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2010 11:38:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Diane. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/9/2010 11:37:00 AM

nice one, enjoyed the read..[P.D.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2010 11:25:00 AM

Interesting write..So this is a monorhyme..I will have to look this one up and see what it is all about...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/9/2010 11:25:00 AM

Cute one! I can just see him dancing a jig all the way to France. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Diane. Best wishes in the contest. Carolyn