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Portrait of a Girl Hold Ski on Shoulder with Kids Stock Photo - Image ...

skis on our shoulders slopes covered with fresh powder smiles on our faces

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Date: 1/22/2024 4:37:00 PM
Bill, your poem can be on the top of the ski brochure. It paints a fun picture.
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Date: 1/23/2024 8:55:00 PM
Thanks, skiing was a lot of fun. Thanks for all the comments today, David. Bill
Date: 1/19/2024 7:53:00 AM
just cute, and rememberings from youth
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Date: 1/22/2024 2:49:00 PM
Thanks for the comments, Yann. Fun times. Have a great week! Bill
Date: 1/16/2024 1:57:00 PM
Hi Bill, sounds like serenity on the slopes. My older brother and sister-in-law were avid skiers. Then they got transferred to Florida years ago and remain Floridians, so they don't do much skiing anymore. Lovely wintry write! Peace and blessings ~
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Date: 1/16/2024 3:55:00 PM
It was fun when I was younger / 40's ... 70's, the fireplace where it's warm is better. LOL Thanks for all the visits and comments, Regina. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 1/16/2024 1:22:00 PM
this is a cute picture showing what must be one of your passions.
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Date: 1/16/2024 3:58:00 PM
Was, even skied in Utah one week! Yeah! it was fun. I also like Lake Tahoe area. Thanks for the visit and comments, my friend. Have a pleasant week! Bill
Date: 1/16/2024 12:09:00 PM
Hi my friend Bill, is this your family, how beautiful, how lovely and how happy you all look - it also looks like you are having a whole lot of fun. the snow looks lovely, so jealous, we have had nothing but rain for the past two week but not complaining, our dams need to fill up. However, Natal a province by the sea is annually hit bad by rains and floods an loss of lives. I can't help but feel for the homeless in moments like this, so sad, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/16/2024 4:03:00 PM
Not my family, but we had a Time-Share at Vail/ Beaver Creek for a few years, and it was a lot of fun. It's been in the teens here for the last week with wind chill below zero Fahrenheit. Sorry to hear about the flooding and casualties. I agree, when the weather gets extreme, I do pray for the homeless. Winter in general is a terrible time to be without adequate shelter. Thanks for the visit and comments, my friend. Have a pleasant week! Bill
Date: 1/14/2024 4:51:00 PM
Reads like a fun day. I have never tried that sport and probably would not have tried it when I was younger. It looks like it would be fun for those so inclined to do it. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara K
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Date: 1/15/2024 6:26:00 PM
Thanks, in return for your visit and comments, Sara. I always appreciate those that take the time to reply and read others poetry. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill
Date: 1/14/2024 5:25:00 AM
I love skiing, especially when the skis are on someone else's feet...I never did it (lol)...but I did jump out of an airplane. Nicely written, Bill. Your friend from NJ, Charlie
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Date: 1/15/2024 6:25:00 PM
That must have been a thrill ... unless you had to! Skiing was fun, but those days are over now ... on to something else. Thanks for the comments, my friend. Bill
Date: 1/11/2024 8:16:00 PM
This must have been an exhilarating experience... ! I can see smile on each face. Beautiful senryu with a beautiful title.
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Date: 1/12/2024 5:13:00 PM
Thank you, my friend, for the visits and comments. Hugs, Bill
Date: 1/6/2024 5:59:00 PM
This is sweet Bill, short but bursting with joy! I have never been skiing, but it looks like snow much fun! I also love the adorable photo of the happy children, very sweet! Happy new year to you and Sara!
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Date: 1/7/2024 9:44:00 PM
Thanks for the visit, comments, and the Happy New Year for us. We wish you a Happy New Year and a great 2024! our friend. Hugs, Bill & Sara
Date: 1/5/2024 12:48:00 PM
Blessed with the snow! Beautiful senryu. What a pitty that I don't have the snow. Bill, my hugsxxxx
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Date: 1/7/2024 9:46:00 PM
We only get snow a few times a year here in our part of Texas, usually only an inch or snow. It's nice to see falling, but can be a mess to drive in. Have a great 2024, my friend. Hugs, Bill
Date: 1/4/2024 10:15:00 AM
Amen to that, Bill! I taught skiing for several years and love each one of your images! Art and I have spent many, many happy hours on the slopes! He, too, taught skiing! Delightful! So happy you got to enjoy the wonderland of winter! Happy New Year to you my lone star friend! Blessings to you of health and happiness for 2024!
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Date: 1/4/2024 5:53:00 PM
Nice to hear you enjoyed and taught skiing, Sam. I had a blast for the get go. Happy New Year to you and Art! Have a great 2024, my friend. Bill
Date: 1/4/2024 10:06:00 AM
I have only been snow skiing once. I was very young, very stupid, and very drunk. The downfall of skiing is that it requires you to be outside in the winter.
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Date: 1/4/2024 5:55:00 PM
LOL, yep that's true, Jerry. I got a kick out of the comment, my friend. Thanks for the smile you caused. Have a pleasant evening! Bill
Date: 1/4/2024 6:19:00 AM
I couldn't master ice skating let alone roller skating ( ended up on crutches) couldn't imagine skiing!
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Date: 1/4/2024 5:56:00 PM
It's not for everyone but can be fun. Thanks for the comments today, Karen. Have a great 2024! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Date: 1/3/2024 7:32:00 PM
Have fun skiing. I wasn't able to master it. The snow is beautiful.
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Date: 1/4/2024 5:57:00 PM
Just being in the mountains covered in snow is enjoyable to me. Thanks for your comments, my friend. Hugs, Bill
Date: 1/3/2024 3:23:00 PM
reminded me of our 'skiing days' at Beaver Creek....you made me smile even though I was scared to death. Your Senyru is perfect...hugs eastside writing bear
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Date: 1/3/2024 4:26:00 PM
Those were the times my friend ... fun memories. Your westside writing bear, Bill
Date: 1/3/2024 12:32:00 PM
Your poem depicts the photo perfectly Bill my Texan buddy!! Nice ….Debx
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Date: 1/5/2024 10:41:00 AM
Next time Bill pop the kettle on!! Debx
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Date: 1/3/2024 4:28:00 PM
Thank you, Deb, always nice to see you've dropped by. I'm tired today, so I'm planning on going to sleep earlier tonight. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 1/3/2024 12:30:00 PM
Do you go skiing much or have you done in the past or do you get inspired by these photos? I guess that is a good way to express and practice short form poetry.. nicely done as always my friend..
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Date: 1/3/2024 4:36:00 PM
When we owned a Travel Agency, Sara and I decided to learn to ski. Sara (34) and Me (41). I loved it, but Sara liked going to the ski lodges and relaxing. She did ski a little, but never got comfortable on skies. Thanks for the visits, my friend. Have a pleasant evening. Bill
Date: 1/3/2024 8:31:00 AM
So lively and beautiful this is, i love the way you’ve written this senryu. Ive tried skiing before , but i must say im terrible at it, my sister is better at skiing. I love the way this senryu flows in such a picturesque manner as well as the picture you’ve used here is so fitting for the poem, pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light today and always.
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Date: 1/3/2024 4:37:00 PM
Thanks, my giver of light, friend. Always a pleasure to see you've dropped by. Light and Love to you, Ink. Bill
Date: 1/3/2024 7:37:00 AM
What a fun write/picture. Have blessed day writing away............
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Date: 1/3/2024 4:38:00 PM
Thanks Paula, have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill
Date: 1/3/2024 7:20:00 AM
And let the fun begin!! Perfect Bill. The happiest of new years to you and Sara!!
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Date: 1/3/2024 4:39:00 PM
Thanks Mark, Happy New Year to you too, my friend. Thanks for dropping by and reading my poetry. Bill
Date: 1/3/2024 7:08:00 AM
Hi Bill love your poem a fav for me hugs Shadow
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Date: 1/3/2024 4:32:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and for the FAV, Shadow. :-) Have a pleasant evening, my friend. Hugs, Bill

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