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Hit 'Em Up Collaboration With Brenda Chiri

I write like bakers bake my rhymes make earth shake Going into contest with me was your biggest mistake I control the earths plates, tectonics, your rhymes are bollocks I cause land slides and earthquakes I don't hate but I do devastate, Is the rhythm of your rhyme hidden? I'm going back and forth with my decision I'd like to think it's something I'm missin' but I cant see it in what you've written, You stagnate rhymes I contemplate the punishment for these crimes, don't harp that you'll defeat me I'm a giant you can't even see me Now back and forth like red and meth I hand you over to little missy, you pissed us both off so we share a rhyme to make you look silly.......... Your rhymes don't even matter my pockets is gettin' fatter Yours getting flatter When you heard the glass shatter That means me and my homies gathered Now you bout to feel the wrath of Somethin' that you wished you hadn't of And all I can say is back up because I'm bout to act up It might not concern you but I'll thermonuclear burn you, you're a human sacrifice Cuz I be smashing mics with the Passion of Christ and Stay fully loaded, equipped with action devices Me n trim shady here to party like Tom Brady We stay cooler than an Eskimo baby V is for Victory, we mastered your trickery Tryna clock like dickory, get smoked like hickory So please stop the bickery, you can't get rid of me Fire colabs from here to infinity you heard her infinity even with a radar and map you cant find our reality we're in another galaxy you've barely the ability of a fetus how dare you compete with us and this U S U K special relationship isn't putting you at a handicap it's natures act, you can't rhyme or rap put your dick between your legs and make a tail walk away with your head down cus your insults fail, the only insult that landed is that you went up against us with terrible stale dribble that you squiggle all brainless and minimal like an unevolved mammal writing without the opposable thumb by miracle sounding dumb and undesirable, when I read it I became miserable, I desire a quick fire high flyer like me with quick wit that aspires but you were dire and dim, you aint no Trim, you're a fool who should return to school. collaboration with Brenda Chiri first and third Trim second Brenda

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/19/2018 10:20:00 AM
Wow.... Now I know not to piss you guys off! ;D Great work on this collaboration!!
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Date: 12/19/2018 1:37:00 AM
What happened to the season of good will to all lol. Brilliant collabaration both. Tom.
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Date: 12/18/2018 11:08:00 PM
You are both quick and witty with the lines, nice one
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