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His Kiss

His lips inviting The moment so exciting He caught me and pressed his face to mine A moment of savage intertwined I will never forget he soft supple touch I remembering wanting it so much The flood of fever in a seconds kiss The smiles the childish laugh the endless wish And I won’t forget the pure bliss All from the minds fabulous reminisce

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/26/2015 12:16:00 PM
This is a well thought piece, showcasing the tender make up of your soul and the immense creativity, so rich in your mind. I so love this and thanks a lot for sharing..
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Date: 8/14/2013 4:50:00 AM
Somehow a kiss like this remains with you.. Lovely piece Laura, you made me smile this afternoon :)
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Date: 8/2/2013 8:36:00 AM
- Sooo sweeet poem Laura, beautiful !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/31/2013 12:41:00 PM
There You Are, Sweet Beautiful Laura Mckenzie. What A Lovely Poem, And Somewhat Different It Seems A Bit Somehow Your Beauty's Words ? Perhaps As Your Priceless Heart Mentioned Amid Your Kind Yet Joyful Visit, It Has Been Awhile Since I Have Beheld As Read Your Lovely Verse. Tis Good To Find You Here Again, For I Always Loved The Beauty I Found Within Your Eyes ~ Keep Brushing And I Am Going To Favour Your Treasures Once More With This Beautiful Poetic Kiss. Love, John
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Date: 7/28/2013 10:09:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 7/25/2013 10:50:00 AM
Full of depth & decadence. Nicely done!
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Date: 7/25/2013 4:08:00 AM
Very beautiful I love the sutle glimpse of life in love.
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Date: 7/24/2013 3:31:00 PM
A beautiful write! :o)
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Date: 7/24/2013 3:27:00 PM
wow, this is cool!!! and you have given me an idea. I want to write about my WORST kiss. haha
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:56:00 PM
this kind of kiss is unforgettable, much like your beautiful lines... divine, laura... thnaks for dropping by..:) huggs
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Date: 7/24/2013 9:34:00 AM
It's a very sweet kiss poem. Excellently penned. Enjoyed the reading. Loved always, bl
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