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His Christmas Gift

Long, long ago when I was seventeen I knew an older man, I had a crush. I noticed him, but me he had not seen. He managed Ralph’s and always made me blush. One eve my mom and I had dinner out. He was seated at the counter alone. He winked at me that left me without doubt, Next time he saw me he asked for my phone. I found he was ten years older than me. He wined and dined me each and ev’ry date. When Christmas came, a box beneath our tree Contained his gift, I knew would be first rate. ‘Twas the finest coat I had ever seen. We dated two years before we parted. Sadly, though he treated me like a queen, It ended and he was broken-hearted. I kept his Christmas gift for many years. It kept me very warm, I loved it so. I gave it to my daughter with some tears. I always think of him when I see snow. 12-19-21 A Christmas Gift Memory Poetry Contest Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley

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Jennifer Fenn

Date: 2/4/2022 1:42:00 PM

What a moving poem Connie!

Thomas Wells

Date: 1/11/2022 6:41:00 PM

This is such a beautiful tribute to his memory and a very human story. Your use of rhyme form is masterful. Happy New Year! - Thomas

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/19/2022 12:49:00 PM

You know, it is very difficult to tell a story in rhyme and keep the facts real without having the rhyme sound forced. I am glad you don’t think that. I appreciate your nice comment Thomas. Thank you very much. Blessings xxoo

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/30/2021 2:49:00 PM

Hello Connie ... a fine nostalgic tale, written well with great rhyme. As usual, fine poetry indeed Connie - Lindsay

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/19/2022 12:57:00 PM

Thank you very much Lindsay. I am behind somewhat in comments but I promise to get over to visit your pages today. Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2021 12:15:00 PM

thanks for the fave on that poem that meant so much to me, Connie.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/19/2022 12:55:00 PM

You are welcome. You know I am honest about the Faves I give. I have to really love a poem or think it exceptional to give it a Fave. Hugs xxoo

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 12/27/2021 1:29:00 AM

Congratulations Connie on your winning placement in the poetry contest! Thank you so much for sharing your nostalgic and heart tugging poem. May you be blessed with much love and joy, health and peace in 2022!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/27/2021 11:56:00 AM

Thank you B.J. for your contest that inspired those memories to come alive through poetry. My granddaughter always asks me to tell her stories from my youth and this helps. I hope your holiday was a happy one. Thank you for my placement in your contest. You got some fantastic entries I have been enjoying. Great choices from you. Blessings xxoo

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/27/2021 12:05:00 AM

Takes my breath away, Connie...heart strings break, mend, break and mend again, am currently on a mend cycle (single by choice!) God Bless You & happy holidays, my friend!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/27/2021 11:58:00 AM

Me too James, as I am a widow now. A time to reflect. Thank you for a very lovely comment. Blessings xxoo

Greg Gaul

Date: 12/26/2021 5:13:00 PM

Snow can be so sweet. Nice one Connie. Thanks for sharing.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/27/2021 11:59:00 AM

Wrapped in a warm coat one can enjoy the cold elements in wonder. Thank you Greg. Blessings xxoo

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/25/2021 9:13:00 AM

Vivid, fond memories of yesteryears, all part of the growing up process. Have a great Christmas and best wishes for the new year, Connie!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/27/2021 12:01:00 PM

I told my granddaughter she should keep a journal which helps to keep those memories alive. My youthful journals got lost we moved so many times. I have lived in our home for 34 years and will never move again. Thank you. Blessings xxoo

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/24/2021 9:39:00 PM

Merry Christmas Connie! Thanks for sharing such a wonderful memory! Congrats on your win!!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/27/2021 11:52:00 AM

Thank you Mark. It is great to be back reading and sharing poetry again here. Blessings xxoo

David Mchattie

Date: 12/24/2021 11:44:00 AM

Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday and a Merry Christmas.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/24/2021 6:44:00 PM

Thank you David. I wish you and your family a lovely holiday. Blessings xxoo

Charles Messina

Date: 12/23/2021 3:01:00 PM

A beautiful memory, Connie. My heart goes out to you this year my friend. I know you have been through a lot. I pray that your Christmas be Merryl and that in this New Year to come, you and your family have a Healthy & happy New Year! Sending love & hugs. Charlie

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/24/2021 6:43:00 PM

Thank you Charles. We had so many plans to all get together these holidays but now that is not possible. I hope next year is a better year for everyone. Christmas blessings. xxoo

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/23/2021 1:28:00 PM

What a lovely memory. People leave a mark on our lives, and at this time of year old memories seem to be all around us :).

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/24/2021 6:51:00 PM

So true. I have many happy memories to keep me warm through the holidays. I wish you a lovely Christmas. Thank you. Blessings xxoo

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/23/2021 10:01:00 AM

Echoes of Dean Martin singing memories Are made of this, you Awake in me Connie Enjoyed thank you for the fb address You might like to look at Dr Robert Malone Https://www.totalhealth.co.uk The original builder of the MRNA Vaccines..)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/24/2021 6:49:00 PM

I checked it out Joe. Thank you for passing it along to me. Have a peaceful Christmas. Blessings xxoo

Debra L Brown

Date: 12/22/2021 8:01:00 PM

This is such a heart felt memory. Thanks you sharing.Blessings ~ Debra

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/23/2021 11:43:00 PM

You are so welcome Debra. It was fun to try to capture this memory in poetic words. Have a lovely Christmas! Blessings xxoo

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/22/2021 3:05:00 AM

A heart-warming love story you have as a precious memory, Connie:) some gifts give us much comfort and revive those old memories:)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/22/2021 8:48:00 AM

It is true Jo. I treasured his warm coat because I didn’t have a warm coat. I hope he found happiness and had the family he wanted. Thank you Jo. Blessings to you and your family this Christmas. xxoo

Valsa George

Date: 12/21/2021 8:02:00 PM

This is so touching and I very much appreciate your candid confession . Definitely the gift he gave must be having a lot of sentimental value to you. I am sure the memory of this gift must be equally thrilling and painful... I wish you all the best in the contest Connie! Have a Happy Christmas!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/22/2021 9:05:00 AM

Thank you for your understanding Valsa. After we parted I met my first love that I wrote about in my poem Penny Hearts. I was nineteen. Some memories never fade. Blessings to you and your family this Christmas. xxoo

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/21/2021 4:56:00 PM

Ah, that is so sweet, and I can see how you treasured it, Connie, We never forget our first love, you made me smile and recall my first crush lol, Wishing you a merry Christmas dear friend. May you find peace in your heart and hope in your soul, always, xo

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/22/2021 9:09:00 AM

Thank you very much Vie. I was too young to marry. My first love I wrote about in my poem Penny Hearts. I was nineteen. I hope you have a beautiful Christmas. Blessings xxoo

Judy Ball

Date: 12/21/2021 3:13:00 PM

What a touching and deeply moving piece this is. Beautifully written with great emotion. Loved it. I think many of us remember certain relationships that we wonder "what if" about. Good stuff. God Bless and Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and yours. JB

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/21/2021 2:16:00 PM

Well, it is a beautiful story. Honestly told. A lot I would change could I have do-overs. You know what they say about hindsight.... We do our best, breaking a few hearts along the way. My guess is, he missed you for a long time, maybe never forgot. Life is a mystery. Timing the greatest mystery. Myself many times either too young or too old. Who knows? Every life is a book's worth. Blessings my friend!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/21/2021 2:51:00 PM

He always asked about me when ever he saw my mother. He managed the store where she shopped. He wanted to marry and have a family right away and I knew I was too immature for marriage. We parted as friends. His gift was so special to me because I did not have a warm coat to wear. I will always think of him with fondness. Thank you Joseph. Have a most wonderful Christmas my friend. Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2021 12:17:00 PM

I once dated a few guys that were like 7 or 8 years older than me. It was early 70's and I think men were more respecful back then, so it was no problem although I was still in high school. All our experiences that brought us joy become more meaningful with time. So glad you have this memory and were able to give the coat to your daughter.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/21/2021 12:57:00 PM

The coat was very special to me because we were living a humble life and I didn’t have a warm coat. I was always attracted to older men but I was too immature to get married. I hope he found someone nice and was able to have the family he sought. Thank you Andrea. xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/21/2021 6:32:00 AM

- Thank you for this beautiful poem, Connie :) - I wish you a wonderful Christmas and a blessed New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/21/2021 12:59:00 PM

I appreciate your visit my friend. It is a busy time of year and many do not have time to comment at this time of year. I hope you have a beautiful Christmas. Blessings xxoo

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 12/21/2021 6:09:00 AM

A beautiful relationship and a moving story. Memories and tokens of heartfelt love take us back to the days we left behind..but those moments are precious! Dear Commie, your poems are fascinating , and we relate to. Merry Christmas! Love and blessings ~ Mala

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/21/2021 1:00:00 PM

Thank you Mala. I am not quite sure if this poem is fitting for the contest but it is a Christmas memory that I cherish. I am glad you enjoyed this poem. I wish you a very beautiful Christmas my friend. Blessings xxoo

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/21/2021 4:49:00 AM

What a story Connie! Life can be a fascinating journey and your memory and its impact are a joy to read and relate to!! Merry Christmas xxoo

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/21/2021 1:04:00 PM

Thank you very much Mike. I was living a humble life and did not have a warm coat which is why his lovely gift meant so much to me. I was just too immature to marry at that age. I hope he found a wonderful mate to share his life with. Have a blessed Christmas. xxoo

Lin Lane

Date: 12/21/2021 1:58:00 AM

Some people we meet along life's way touch us in a way we will never forget. Such was your relationship, Connie. Good luck with your entry.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/21/2021 1:06:00 PM

Thank you very much Lin. I’m not sure this is what she is looking for but it is a Christmas memory I cherish. I didn’t have a warm coat which is why I appreciated his gift so much. Have a blessed Christmas my friend. xxoo

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/20/2021 9:03:00 PM

WoW! Connie, That was such a heartfelt and moving memory. Thanks for sharing such a story. Best wishes in the in the contest-Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/21/2021 1:07:00 PM

Thank you Alexis. I am not sure that is exactly the kind of interest she’s looking for but it is a Christmas memory I cherish. I didn’t have a warm coat which is why I valued his gift so much. Have a beautiful Christmas my friend. xxoo