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Hint of Fall

Descending acorns Now under a hunters moon Falling with a plunk (Haiku Me Some Nature, Please contest ) Written by Laura McKenzie

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Date: 7/31/2013 11:17:00 AM
I love haiku. Very nice!
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:32:00 PM
Like the sound imagery in the last line. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/6/2011 1:30:00 PM
Dear Laura, Many congratulations on your super win in Constance's contest. Wonderful Haiku you have written. So nice to see you here at the soup again. I am away for awhile, devoting my time to writing a novel. Thank you for your recent kind comments on my sonnet 'A Gift From God'. Elaine
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Date: 9/6/2011 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest Laura. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2011 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.
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Date: 9/4/2011 8:27:00 PM
great title for this little acorn gem, Laura! congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/4/2011 2:57:00 PM
love the sound effect! congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 9/4/2011 2:51:00 PM
Congrats Laura! Kim
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Date: 9/4/2011 2:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. love phyl
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Date: 9/4/2011 8:02:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest,Laura
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Date: 9/4/2011 5:15:00 AM
hey Laura congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/3/2011 11:29:00 PM
Congrats Laura on your wonderful winning piece ..a stunning poetry entry for this contest my friend.. superbly penned luv..
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Date: 9/3/2011 10:03:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Good luck in Constance's contest..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 9/3/2011 8:24:00 AM
The fall is not far away Laura. It seems to have appeared quicker this year, mainly as we never really had a summer. You sure have captured this lovely season through your words. Good luck in the contest, have a lovely weekend :)
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Date: 9/2/2011 7:01:00 PM
yes I can almost hear those acorns 'falling with a plunk' in fall :) good luck in the contest...
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 9/2/2011 7:50:00 PM
Thank you ! :)
Date: 9/2/2011 9:06:00 AM
Wonderfully visual and in perfect form. Excellent! Michael
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 9/2/2011 7:50:00 PM
Thank You for your words of encouragement ! :)
Date: 9/2/2011 12:49:00 AM
Laura, sweet can't wait. Thank you for sharing your haiku, have yourself a nice one,..p.d.
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 9/2/2011 7:49:00 PM
Thank You!
Date: 9/1/2011 7:00:00 PM
breathtaking view Laura .. feeling those acorns plunk as they do in my neck of the woods NJ.. perfect entry my friend..good luck..and oh so nice to see and hear from u luv... what has been going on with u? miss miss miss..
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 9/2/2011 7:49:00 PM
Linda thank you my sweetie!!!! :)