Him

I feel him everywhere He's my savior and loving prayer Let me tell you he's mighty fine Smiling eyes to see me through In everything I choose to do The very best of humankind My very soul my dream come true Never loved anyone like I love you God knows I thank him all the time I feel him everywhere Angels sent him I'm aware I will love him till the end of time

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/8/2018 9:08:00 AM

I seen to be drawn back to this one again. A refreshing read.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 5/25/2017 4:41:00 AM

Very passionate; nicely done -JT

Carol B.
Date: 11/10/2017 7:31:00 PM

Thanks :)

J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/28/2016 8:58:00 AM

Beautiful verse. (: A sweet dedication to a loved one in your life. Precious piece. A 7 for beauty and uniqueness.

Carol B.
Date: 1/14/2017 3:31:00 PM

Thank you so much for the nice comment. This comment made my day!

Joseph May

Date: 11/7/2016 3:27:00 AM

Beautiful write Carol...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/4/2016 8:10:00 AM

Good morning.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/31/2016 8:29:00 AM

Well worth another read. Have a wonderful week.

Carol B.
Date: 11/2/2016 11:54:00 AM

Richard, Thank you so much for this huge compliment. Have a wonderful week as well. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/30/2016 11:50:00 PM

This is beautiful Carol. It is so comforting to know there is someone you can always count on in time of need. ; ) 7

Carol B.
Date: 11/2/2016 11:56:00 AM

Thanks so much for your beautiful comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2016 5:36:00 PM

wonderful passion for Christ, Carol!!

Carol B.
Date: 11/2/2016 11:56:00 AM

Thanks :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2016 2:01:00 PM

- A beautiful poem, Carol - Enjoy reading it this evening :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol B.
Date: 10/30/2016 2:43:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise :) Wishing you a great evening as well.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/30/2016 3:54:00 AM

A loving testimony, Carol. Beautifully written and expressed. I share the same sentiments. Much love and more love to you and yours.

Carol B.
Date: 10/30/2016 4:06:00 PM

Thanks Freddie :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/29/2016 8:45:00 AM

Just excellent. A beautiful relationship declared and sung. A Fav.

Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:54:00 PM

It's the most precious gift and I cherish him. I count my lucky stars everyday!

Abosede Ogundare

Date: 10/29/2016 6:29:00 AM

This is lovely... it will make a great song.

Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:51:00 PM

Thanks :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/29/2016 6:19:00 AM

Such devotion, Carol. Lovely!

Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:48:00 PM

Thanks Daniel :)

Jannie Breedt

Date: 10/29/2016 2:51:00 AM

Wow some lucky guy.If its for God , He will be gratefull too God bless

Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:47:00 PM

I'm the lucky one :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/28/2016 7:44:00 PM

Now this is a Love beyond compare. Amen!

Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:47:00 PM

So very true :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/28/2016 5:03:00 PM

Hi Carol, This is beautiful. Your love for God shines bright in this piece:-) Alexis

Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:45:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful comment :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/28/2016 4:16:00 PM

Very nice!

Carol B.
Date: 10/29/2016 2:44:00 PM

Thank you:)