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Masking your emotions destroys your identity...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/12/2018 8:33:00 PM
AMEN, AMEN - If you aren't yourself, your life isn't a life. Can't say more because my hands are busy clapping ..
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Date: 10/15/2018 11:34:00 AM
Thanks again CayCay...
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Date: 10/12/2018 8:34:00 PM
Oh, my gosh - I already commented! Oh well, another day, another way to love this write. We must laugh about all things memory - we must, right?
Date: 10/8/2018 7:07:00 AM
Hi Charlie, your words are wise and true. So few words that can say so much. Excellent Monoku my friend. I did hide my emotions for so many years, now i let them fly free. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 10/8/2018 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Mike...
Date: 9/19/2018 10:30:00 AM
True so true
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Date: 10/15/2018 11:35:00 AM
Thank you Kim...
Date: 9/4/2018 12:26:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your monoku. Sometimes it is better to hide our emotions and sometimes we need to share them with others. Sometimes a person really needs to share and get it out so that there can be healing. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/5/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thank you Sara...
Date: 9/2/2018 7:52:00 PM
This two-liner is like a double edged sword, Charlie. It all depends on the kind of emotions one is masking, I'd say. And some identities are better hidden than known. This has been, and still is, my experience. Many thanks for reading me. Best to you, and stop by again. / M
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Date: 9/3/2018 11:25:00 AM
Thanks Maurice,,,
Date: 8/31/2018 9:12:00 PM
Oh, this one rings real true Charlie. We need to just be ourselves and like minded people will be attracted to us. A great Monoku! : )
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Date: 9/1/2018 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Connie...
Date: 8/31/2018 5:13:00 AM
Hey, like minds lay in the same gutter - I posted one 8/30 along the same lines, I kid you not, I sure wouldn't kid you, Charlie. And, so I obviously think this deep, wise and impressive! All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 8/31/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thanks CayCay, I'll check it out...
Date: 8/30/2018 2:37:00 AM
True, Charlie:)
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Date: 8/30/2018 10:57:00 AM
Thanks Jo...
Date: 8/28/2018 3:22:00 PM
Without a doubt that's why it's hidden...Nice write Charlie
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Date: 8/29/2018 10:27:00 AM
Thanks Arturo...
Date: 8/28/2018 3:09:00 PM
to open up and own one's honest feelings is a true mark of dignity, charlie... remarkable insight!... huggs
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Date: 8/28/2018 3:10:00 PM
Thank you Nette...
Date: 8/27/2018 4:18:00 PM
Yes, so true. And sometimes it takes very long to come to this realization.
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Date: 8/28/2018 1:18:00 PM
Thank you Agnes...
Date: 8/26/2018 4:13:00 PM
so true, Charlie. I am about as transparent as they come and I can see those who hide truth of how they feel. They are not in a good place.
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Date: 8/27/2018 11:55:00 AM
Thanks Andrea...
Date: 8/26/2018 12:17:00 PM
I'm very emotional about your monoku...and I agree Charlie...we live and breathe through our emotions...if we hide them...might as well talk to a wall...love & light
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Date: 8/27/2018 11:48:00 AM
Thanks WW...
Date: 8/26/2018 11:00:00 AM
Well not always Charlie.. sometimes we need to hide our emotions, so we do not get hurt.. Guess it depends on the situation.. Great one liner..
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Date: 8/26/2018 11:44:00 AM
So we want fear to define us at times? I'm quite certain that's true. Just not the way I would want to be remembered. Thanks for making me think about it again and the visit...
Date: 8/26/2018 8:08:00 AM
A salient piece. I do agree.
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Date: 8/26/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Richard...
Date: 8/25/2018 11:14:00 PM
Indeed! Beautifully expressed truth, Charlie. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/26/2018 9:15:00 AM
Thank you Susan...
Date: 8/25/2018 9:45:00 PM
YES, YES and oh, YES! You nailed a truth I hold close. My applause. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/26/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thank you CayCay...
Date: 8/25/2018 11:41:00 AM
Well said, Charlie..wearing a facade doesn't work for long.
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Date: 8/26/2018 9:08:00 AM
Thank you Vijay...
Date: 8/25/2018 11:34:00 AM
So true Charlie. Great one :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/26/2018 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Heidi...

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