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Hidden Path

A shadow falls over the ruins. As the path leads her to where She wants to go. The adventures played out In her mind. Heading off the beaten path Is what she read about so many times. In search of hidden gems That sparkled and shined. 4 am 6/ 13/ 2017

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Date: 2/28/2018 1:51:00 AM
Nice poem......the path to glory is through such beaten paths............hope she get what she is looking for or struggling for
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Date: 10/27/2017 10:14:00 PM
Lovely poetic write Debbie. Hope she finds her prince charming along the same path!
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Date: 6/17/2017 10:21:00 PM
Hi Debbie, nicely written, evokes memories of adventure and discovery. Regards, Craig
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Date: 6/17/2017 7:11:00 AM
Hope she found those hidden gems. A gem of a poem...Maria
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Date: 6/16/2017 9:01:00 PM
Sweet one for getting off the beaten path, Debbie. Glad to finally see this new one of yours. I am still way behind here but promise to see that last new one of yours later!
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Date: 6/15/2017 5:32:00 AM
The ruins hold many treasures...Nicely penned Debbie
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Date: 6/15/2017 4:36:00 AM
Hi Debbie , lovely write , how exciting treasure hunting :))))hugs
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Date: 6/14/2017 9:21:00 AM
I like the mystique of the ruins Debbie. It reminds me of Ireland. Very nice! : )
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Date: 6/14/2017 5:02:00 AM
Intriguing write, Debbie! Find those hidden gems! Nicely done
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