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Her Tears

The look of diamonds. Were caught by the candlelight. Dove-colored clouds passed overhead. As a summer storm came riding in. On a cold wind ~ soft rolling seas. Colors from the sun had all but disappeared. Into the night of glistening starlight. Summer days were drifting on by. As slow as molasses. You might even say. As the diamonds rolled down. Oct 2, 2015

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Date: 6/14/2017 1:29:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, I really enjoyed reading it however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 5/15/2017 6:03:00 PM
What a beautiful couplet with flawless flow and awesome imagery! Just my kind of poetry! Thanks, Debbie for sharing this nice treat - a 7 of course! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 4/17/2017 2:34:00 AM
This is what I would undoubtedly call an ode.
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Date: 4/2/2017 11:26:00 AM
Incredible ink
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Date: 3/25/2017 6:07:00 AM
Good Morning Debbie. This is marvelous poetic expression. Your words were wonderfully executed and placed. Slow as molasses indeed. The theme and entry are as gentle as tears themselves. Well done entirely.
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Date: 3/21/2017 3:08:00 PM
- This is a beautiful poem, Debbie - A wonderful way to describe tears - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/14/2017 9:40:00 AM
Such beautiful imagery in your simple poem, Debbie:)
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Date: 3/13/2017 9:00:00 PM
This poem is simply awesome Debbie. Your imagery coupling the rain with her tears is beyond beautiful! I love it! A fave for me and a high seven! ; )
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Date: 3/8/2017 4:23:00 AM
Now this I like Debbie, it is a great way to write poetry and so easy to read, I really loved this one, thank you so much for sharing and take care.......Vera
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