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Her Love Climaxed

Her crimson lips begged for a kiss The lost love that she could reminisce. .. The silver moon had once witnessed the romance Infinite passion and foreplay at a glance Her love climaxed In the glimmering twilight

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Robert Lindley

Date: 5/25/2016 9:36:00 AM

So much romance in such few words my friend. "Her love climaxed In the glimmering twilight" ^^^^^^^pure gold!!!! Super 7.....

James Inman

Date: 4/30/2016 7:24:00 PM

Fiery indeed Red, but I think rather sad; perhaps, the next time her passion will climax and her love will continue to grow and she will have no need to reminisce lost love. Nice write.

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/28/2016 11:13:00 PM

I had to go back and check out my new inspirations work. Wow! Which one is the sequel? And I thought your name was for the hair. Wrong! Sensually sultry. Well done...

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/26/2016 2:53:00 PM

MASSIVE GOOSEBUMPS!!!!!!!! Ah, the power of the moonlight...releasing the true colors from us all. Strong stuff.

John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 3/12/2016 10:25:00 AM

Proof if ever it were needed that great things come in small packages, it would be great to read a few more verses tho.

Red Fiery
Date: 3/20/2016 8:25:00 AM

Thank you Johny....:)

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/10/2016 9:47:00 PM

With a few well chosen words you have penned a passionate romantic poem! Well done :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/9/2016 7:26:00 PM

Dropping by to say hi. Hugs Rick.

Red Fiery
Date: 3/9/2016 7:50:00 PM

It's always gr8 to see you here( my small kingdom welcomes you )

Brian Mcclain

Date: 3/9/2016 1:04:00 PM

Hi Red, Very impassioned write, as per usual. Nicely done! Oh, maybe you shoulda entered this in the United Colours Red contest! Cheers, Brian

Red Fiery
Date: 3/9/2016 7:49:00 PM

Thank you Brian! Cheers to you ...!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/9/2016 7:49:00 AM

this is a real sizzler and i like how you dealt with the theme in a passionate way, red!..huggs

Red Fiery
Date: 3/9/2016 7:49:00 PM

thanx nette..ur an swesome poetess...

Constance La France

Date: 3/8/2016 7:57:00 AM

Red, oh you are truly a fiery girl, so sexy and sensual is your write, but it is life and desire, I applaud your bravery to write what is real so beautifully, wonderful and I am loving this 7 ~

Red Fiery
Date: 3/9/2016 7:48:00 PM

Thank you Broken Wings..!

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/7/2016 2:12:00 AM

Very hot! may be I better go back to the old folks home. LOL. I see a lot of my contemporaries have already discovered your talent. Peace young lady:)

Red Fiery
Date: 3/7/2016 9:36:00 PM

:)...blushing...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2016 9:16:00 PM

Hi Red, WOW, hot and steamy... I have a question, are you the her in this poem? ;) Love LINDA

Red Fiery
Date: 3/7/2016 9:37:00 PM

How i wish....*lol*...love and hugs red

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2016 7:17:00 AM

I guess this is what you call a "quickie" I think you have developed a new form.;0)

Red Fiery
Date: 3/6/2016 7:45:00 AM

Hope you liked it !..soupmail

Paul Callus

Date: 3/6/2016 6:46:00 AM

This is lovely and descriptive with suggestive imagery; remembrance of a passionate romance which appears to be in the past, but still fresh in the mind. You imply a lot in so few words. ~ All the best // paul

Red Fiery
Date: 3/6/2016 7:47:00 AM

Paul, very much fresh in the mind...I will be back with my dream sequence ..

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/5/2016 11:23:00 PM

Good brevity. I wonder what else the silver moon has witnessed ... ;)

Red Fiery
Date: 3/5/2016 11:49:00 PM

Maybe everything. ..or maybe this is just a wild imagination. ..;)