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Hemisphere In Between

Winter's subtle brush and Spring's balmy stroke On ragged frost to glossy flowers Will on with the heaven's wheel go— A passing through your new older hours, The sun's condolences, for dark power. As you've preened birdsong into my fear, Your beauty's long and lasting ear— My heart's breakthrough, tissues finally shed Its life pulsing; pushing things; other years— Vibrations only after freezing's midst.

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Date: 5/2/2024 2:55:00 PM
Really beautiful imagery and beautiful words Paige! Debx
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Date: 4/30/2024 9:46:00 AM
Wow this is beautiful! One of my faves from you! The rhymes and rhythm and imagery is outstanding! I especially loved the opening lines “ Winter's subtle brush and Spring's balmy stroke On ragged frost to glossy flowers Will on with the heaven's wheel go” just beautiful. A fave it is for me! Pleasure reading this
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Date: 4/28/2024 9:48:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in this one.
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Date: 4/28/2024 9:21:00 AM
It is very hard to move forward... without remembering how it is done. A simple hug to you my dear. A special way to put this thought out there very clever! "A passing through your new older hours" I agree sometimes the most beautiful is just knowing people care and that you are heard! You have got this! Because friendship matters I am yours.... A.S.
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Date: 4/27/2024 1:49:00 PM
an enchanting creation, Paige. I'm not familiar with this form but what you've written is touching. I especially liked the last three lies...they 'spoke' to me. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 4/27/2024 4:17:00 AM
A lovely dizain, dear Paige! Love the first line, the cool contrast! …the sun’s condolences…birdsong into my fear… Your beauty's long and lasting ear… hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 4/26/2024 10:06:00 PM
I can feel the song in this poem. The awakening spring is enthralling. Thanks for a great read.
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