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Helpless

I feel like I can't do a thing. I sit and I cry, I hurt and I bleed. No matter what I do, no matter what I try, I can't feel like I belong. I feel like I disappoint you. All I feel is this sting, deep in my heart. I feel so helpless, and you wander around, with a smile on your face. I don't know what to do...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/27/2016 6:41:00 AM
Very palpable, Destinee...I can almost feel your hurt and pain - Superbly crafted! My best regards. :) john P.s An obvious seven.
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Destinee Tucker
Date: 8/27/2016 9:29:00 AM
Thank you John. This isn't my best one. I wrote this last night very last minute and very hurt. It seems to be the only time I can write good, deep poetry. If you like this, you should check out a few of my others.

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