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HEAVEN'S NATURE WITNESS OUR DREAM Outstretched maternal skies bleeding slowly as the sun smiles, running golden rays fugue flux flowed by, frozen bear-shaped clouds extend their arms to hug the beams. Charmingly, the light meets the earth with a tender embrace... Escaped warmth escalates, it raise the speed of roses blush, dew caressing snake-grass dried in flash, gold-and-black striped wasps kiss--- the red apples chin and oh how sweet even the nestled mistrels began to sing! Skirt-lair of violets and lilacs puff luring scents, it populates the atmosphere. Finger-tantalized tendrils of hair stroke repeatedly the whistling wind, gently I clap my hands: an accompaniment to thumps and stomps of the two children laughing, dancing 'round and 'round. Beside me, I hear his heart, beats! Beats! B-e-a-t...! Beating like a little butterfly fluttering greet, he planted a silky kiss atop my head. Under the windows of gigantic trees, the heavens witness the fruits, we long dream. When Cupids arrow land finally hitting the right hearts: "Imperfect but perfectly matched"... Love mimics the tone of evergreens, the sadness throbs tearing twang it will be readily forgotten, unmindful of the questions: how and why... _______________________________________________________________ ***FREE VERSE - other term "vers libre", a form that doesn't use or follow a specific consistent meter; a regular rhyme and a particular number of lines. It is based on normal pauses and natural rhythmical phrases as compared to the artificial constraints of normal poetry. ***I love this poetry form because it allows me to write artistically; pattern;incorporate;narrate and include a bit of everything about other poetry forms: rhymes, alliteration, personification, metaphor, prose, rhythm, sounds etc. I as well can limit two lines with its syllable count to achieve beat and intensity. I alone can limit my pen. Lastly, it underlines POETRY FREEDOM and POETRY EXPRESSION not limited by rules. ***For the contest: Poetry Writing #1 Sponsor: Broken Wings*** __Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo__ 1:16 pm, December 16, 2015

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Date: 12/19/2015 11:55:00 PM
Fantastic write, Olive, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/19/2015 5:27:00 AM
Excellent win Olive incredible write enjoyed reading. Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 12/18/2015 9:40:00 PM
Wow great take with this lovely form Olive.. free verse my fav too.. Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/18/2015 9:29:00 PM
Hi Olive, Congratulations on your sweet win Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 12/18/2015 9:14:00 PM
Olive, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN.... LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2015 4:08:00 PM
you do free verse so well, Olive. IN fact I can't think of a more fitting form for you to showcase. I think it's your best style!! Congrats with this gem.
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Date: 12/18/2015 2:06:00 PM
an excellent write Olive many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/16/2015 1:01:00 PM
Fine fine poetry Olive, delightfully written. So love the wordage, and sure to do well in 'Broken Wings' contest ~~ hugs//James ~~xx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/17/2015 8:57:00 AM
JAmes, this a composition inspired by my dream.. =`) This a shoot to the moon take for the contest but let it be.. =`) Tight hugs and warm smiles. Your lil one, Olive ELoisa =`)
Date: 12/16/2015 12:34:00 AM
Excellent. beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/16/2015 8:23:00 PM
thanks much Ravi... =`) I'm glad you like it, like I do.. =`) thanks much!

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