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within every assailable heart-his glory dwells Heavenly Monoku Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues 01/27/2019

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Date: 9/24/2021 5:23:00 AM
True, somebody say we'll weighted words.. And I agree with them.
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Date: 4/6/2020 4:05:00 AM
My joy to read this win of yours, although I am late. Panagiotaxxx
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Date: 4/6/2020 3:04:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota...
Date: 4/11/2019 4:22:00 PM
Wise words my friend :)
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Date: 4/13/2019 6:11:00 AM
Thank you P.M....
Date: 3/1/2019 7:51:00 AM
Undisputably true, Charlie! Uplifting. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/4/2019 11:58:00 AM
Thank you Paul...
Date: 2/27/2019 8:58:00 PM
Well weighted words my friend. Food for thought for many also. You chose your words wisely and well. Keep them coming. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 2/28/2019 11:55:00 AM
Thank you David...
Date: 2/21/2019 1:36:00 PM
Hi Charlie, Good one-liner! I found it to be lovely and uplifting at the same time. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/21/2019 2:22:00 PM
Thank you Alexis...
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Date: 2/21/2019 2:19:00 PM
I see already commented on this gem:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/21/2019 2:17:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed it , thank you Alexis...
Date: 2/20/2019 10:12:00 PM
tears at the beauty of this sentence and its truth...
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Date: 2/21/2019 12:44:00 AM
Peace be with you P.S., thank you...
Date: 2/20/2019 9:49:00 PM
Unassailable truth, Charlie. "Build me a Sanctuary, and I will dwell in them." (Book of Exodus)… Not in it; not in the sanctuary will the Lord dwell. But in them---in the hearts of those who built it.... Like you wrote!! Wonderful. ~ Gershon
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Date: 2/21/2019 12:42:00 AM
Thank you very much for the encouragement Gershon, I really appreciated it...
Date: 2/16/2019 4:16:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL...UPLIFTING ...TRUE...ONE LINER. Thank you for this, Charlie. Much appreciated. Elaine
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Date: 2/17/2019 8:23:00 AM
Thank you Elaine...
Date: 2/3/2019 1:16:00 PM
Great one liner my friend..
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Date: 2/7/2019 11:07:00 AM
Thank you SO...
Date: 2/1/2019 6:21:00 PM
back with my congrats for your win.
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Date: 2/2/2019 9:11:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 1/31/2019 5:53:00 PM
Lovely done Charlie! Congratulations on your win :) xomo
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Date: 2/1/2019 4:16:00 PM
Thank you Maureen...
Date: 1/31/2019 4:46:00 PM
Yes, very inspirational and well-written, Charlie. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 2/1/2019 4:16:00 PM
Thank you Sandra...
Date: 1/31/2019 12:23:00 PM
Great inspirational Monoku, Charlie. Congratulations on your win. ~`* Eve
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Date: 1/31/2019 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Eve...
Date: 1/30/2019 8:15:00 PM
Very well said, Charlie, and congrats for your well-deserved win. Honored to share lst place with you - Bob
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Date: 1/31/2019 11:41:00 AM
Thank you Bob, how very kind of you...
Date: 1/30/2019 5:32:00 PM
Hi Charie, Great one-liner! Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/31/2019 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Alexis...
Date: 1/30/2019 4:57:00 PM
Love the sincerity, Charlie.
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Date: 1/31/2019 11:33:00 AM
Thanks Harry...
Date: 1/30/2019 3:35:00 PM
Love the wording! Congrats, Charlie! xo Kim
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Date: 1/31/2019 11:28:00 AM
Thanks Kim for your consideration and kind words...
Date: 1/30/2019 12:18:00 PM
Amen I say to that dear Charlie
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Date: 1/31/2019 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Pixie...
Date: 1/28/2019 12:21:00 PM
- Beautiful and heavenly, Charlie :) - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/28/2019 12:36:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...
Date: 1/28/2019 2:54:00 AM
Absolutely and eternally true my friend, Charlie! Great Monuku!
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Date: 1/28/2019 6:22:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios...
Date: 1/27/2019 4:22:00 PM
Wonderful, Charlie
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Date: 1/27/2019 8:37:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 1/27/2019 2:47:00 PM
Your words enliven faith, Charlie..truly glorious poem.
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Date: 1/27/2019 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Vijay...
Date: 1/27/2019 1:34:00 PM
Well done, my friend. I am bowing to the reverence and holiness of this monoku.
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Date: 1/27/2019 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Caren...
Date: 1/27/2019 11:54:00 AM
Charlie, so true, he never leaves us ~
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Date: 1/27/2019 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Dear Heart...

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