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Heaven Sent Slowly, dawn emerges with crimson rays, Portrays its sovereign self amidst the hues As warmth endows its worth on seas of trees. Waves of verdant growth glows in divine design Where sylvan showers cap canopies with a Transparent radiant rainbow arc’s blessing. 6-17-22 ~Honorable Mention~ Bite Size Poem no.47 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 8/13/2022 4:24:00 AM
A lovely scene capturing the eyes and delighting the heart ! Enjoyed the majestic arrival of the dawn !
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Date: 8/13/2022 4:23:00 AM
A lovely scene capturing the eyes and delighting the heart ! Enjoyed the majestic arrival of the dawn !
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Date: 7/25/2022 10:10:00 AM
Imagery is awesome... The colour you painted with words are wonderful... Great write
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Date: 7/19/2022 11:38:00 AM
Hi Connie, you bring dawn to life in such an excellently painted canvas with your flowing words of wonder. This piece of poetry was Heaven sent to your soul. Excellent work Connie. Hugs always ..... Mike.
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Date: 7/17/2022 9:55:00 AM
Dear Connie, your vibrant pen spills such lush and lovely imagery of the new day dawning.. "Heaven sent", indeed, and so is your inspiring artistry, captivating one's heart and soul. Warmest wishes and hugs, my sweet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/1/2022 9:12:00 AM
I had to revisit this beauty, Connie; you are in my prayers. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 6/23/2022 8:49:00 PM
Great and beautiful scene painting. Congratulations!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/24/2022 3:27:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Blessings xxoo
Date: 6/23/2022 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write. Love It. Today, be blessed with your win...........
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/24/2022 3:28:00 AM
Thank you Paula. Blessings xxoo
Date: 6/22/2022 9:29:00 PM
Lovely pen Connie so insightful and filled with lovely imagery too. Blessings always,Gordon xox
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/24/2022 3:27:00 AM
Thank you Gordon. I appreciate your lovely comment. Blessings xxoo
Date: 6/22/2022 4:11:00 PM
makes me miss the verdant surrounding, a lovely walk with Thoreau if there ever was one
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/24/2022 3:26:00 AM
Thank you for such a lovely comment Timothy. Blessings xxoo
Date: 6/21/2022 10:02:00 AM
Indeed, a heaven sent start to a new day has been given life thanks to your able pen, Connie. I can tell you're enjoying writing again! Sometimes a short hiatus can be very beneficial. ~ Warm regards, my friend // paul
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Date: 6/24/2022 3:25:00 AM
Thank you very much Paul. Blessings xxoo
Date: 6/21/2022 5:33:00 AM
Dawn has never before been more vividly actuated and gloriously on display. Lovely write!
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Date: 6/20/2022 7:37:00 PM
Love this beautiful imagery created by your perfect words Connie. xoxo
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Date: 6/20/2022 8:10:00 AM
A majestic scene Connie, magnified with your wonderful poetry.
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Date: 6/20/2022 2:30:00 AM
Dawn dawns upon us in this piece, CMW. Thanks.
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Date: 6/19/2022 8:53:00 PM
What a gorgeous scene!
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Date: 6/19/2022 7:21:00 PM
I love the last line, Connie, this is so nice, it takes me away to when I once saw a double rainbow!
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Date: 6/19/2022 5:47:00 PM
Mother Nature paints her sprawling canvas with her masterful, extravagant brush strokes. Lovely write. Robert
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Date: 6/19/2022 6:01:00 AM
Connie, I like how you topped off this lovely write with a rainbow...
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Date: 6/19/2022 4:47:00 AM
Connie, your early morning imagery does indeed inspire in its beauty !! It does feel heaven sent! What a fantastic bite size poem , Happy Sunday xxoo
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Date: 6/18/2022 4:33:00 PM
Nice entry, Connie. I especially like the alliteration you've sprinkled into this poem. Good luck my friend, Bill
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Date: 6/18/2022 11:22:00 AM
Lucky you live in rainbow land! A great entry! Aloha!
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Date: 6/18/2022 9:33:00 AM
Beautiful images awakening a kind of joy in the reader. Good work, Connie.
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Date: 6/18/2022 5:52:00 AM
Exquisite images succinctly delivered, Connie. Always a joy to read your poems.
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Date: 6/18/2022 4:28:00 AM
Lovely alliteration! sylvan showers cap canopies…
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