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Heaven a Life of Forever

not just a dream, but heaven. songs of merry throughout and upward heaven in the inland garden, luscious lavender hills, dipped in flickering white mountain caps I sit near the river's edge, bathing in the brilliant sunshine whilst my feet splash the blue mirrored hedge watching the swirls on the depthless water, the in and out of bees, butterflies, and hummingbird flutter to savor the nectar from the chalice of fragrance of flowers. smelling the wild spray of dandelions, tiger lilies, bearberries in the calm melody of dance as the breeze weaves through trees and upon green blade of the herbal sweet sedge, whilst children in lively play. a life of forever, no death or suffering, but love. 6/2/2020 Heaven Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina Riddle

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Date: 6/5/2020 11:17:00 AM
I can detect your absolute love for nature - every line has its fragrance and a certain in fact, a great deal of imagination that tickles our fancy. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/4/2020 4:01:00 AM
What a blissful picture of heaven you have painted Eve! Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/3/2020 10:57:00 PM
Back to say congratulations on your first place win. So elegant and rich in its imagery.
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Date: 6/3/2020 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a poem and place it will be. Let's go. Enjoy your win and day..............
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Date: 6/3/2020 9:50:00 AM
Beautiful verse. congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/2/2020 10:41:00 PM
Luscious blending of images in color, nature and experience. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 6/2/2020 7:35:00 PM
I think it is even more beautiful than we can imagine. This is really beautiful Eve. Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/2/2020 7:27:00 PM
I love this and am so happy to congratulate you on your winning entry. Thank you for entering my contest. I enjoyed this and wish you many blessings and love, Gina
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Date: 6/2/2020 5:49:00 PM
a marvelous piece of heaven so beautifully rendered, eve...huggs
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Date: 6/2/2020 2:49:00 AM
The place we all want to eventually go to. Well written Eve. Good luck in the contest Tom
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