Heaven

His lovely wife is named Heaven She scolds him seventy times seven Yet, Big Joe just never really cared In Heaven he lives happily, hearing impaired! Stacey Brown 2-6-14 Dr. Ram Mehta contest Husbands are in heaven whose wives scold not

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 3/4/2014 1:44:00 PM

Lol.. Nicely done, Stacy! Congrats on your fine win!!

Stacey Brown
Date: 3/5/2014 8:11:00 PM

Thank you Abdilhafe! Blessings, Stacey

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/3/2014 6:33:00 PM

Yours is similar to mine..wrting about the hearing impaired. lol...Congrats to you. BG

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 3/2/2014 7:09:00 PM

fun take on this poem challenge, Stacey, congratulations on your win!

Stacey Brown
Date: 3/3/2014 8:35:00 AM

thank you for you kind words! Blessings, Stacey

Huberta Van Akkeren

Date: 3/2/2014 4:28:00 PM

Brilliant loved it congratulations on your win

Stacey Brown
Date: 3/3/2014 8:36:00 AM

Thank you Huberta! Blessings, Stacey

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/2/2014 12:48:00 PM

reat humor spicing the theme.stacey.. congrats!

Stacey Brown
Date: 3/3/2014 8:37:00 AM

Thanks Nette, blessings to you and yours, Stacey

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/2/2014 10:49:00 AM

Cute! Congrats.

Stacey Brown
Date: 3/3/2014 8:37:00 AM

Thanks for you Richard! Blessings, Stacey

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/2/2014 9:06:00 AM

Stacey congratulations on your well deserved win I enjoyed this clerihew, nicely done -Connie

Stacey Brown
Date: 3/3/2014 8:38:00 AM

Thank you for your kid words! many Blessings to you and yours, Stacey

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 3/2/2014 4:39:00 AM

Congrats on the win Stacey . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.

Stacey Brown
Date: 3/3/2014 8:40:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kinds words, definitely well received! many Blessings to you and yours

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/2/2014 3:46:00 AM

Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on the fine win, stacey

Stacey Brown
Date: 3/3/2014 8:41:00 AM

Thank you again Dr. Ram for another fun contest! Blessings to you and yours, Stacey

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/28/2014 7:57:00 AM

Cute twist there at the end. I like the move into heaven following the prompt. It was heaven on earth for him too while he was with her. I love the clerihew as a form and yours in particular.

Stacey Brown
Date: 2/28/2014 9:36:00 AM

thank you so much for your kind words! many Blessings, Stacey

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/6/2014 11:46:00 AM

- Stacey, great clerihew - well done for the contest - Good luck ! - Hope you win. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Stacey Brown
Date: 2/6/2014 11:49:00 AM

Thank you very much Anne Lise for the very kind words! blessings to you my friend from God the Father and our Lord Jesus Christ! xoxo, Stacey