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Heather's Feather

There was once a hot dancer named Heather Who for her act wore just a huge feather She fumbled her prop one night And much to her fan's delight Fled from the stage in her altogether

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Michael Tor

Date: 6/18/2023 5:52:00 PM

Lovely and funny Robert... Enjoyed reading my friend. Thank you for sharing...

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 6/19/2023 6:30:00 AM

Thank you, Michael, for stopping byl Best to you - Bob

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/9/2023 3:56:00 AM

Ha ha ha, love it xx

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 6/9/2023 6:30:00 AM

Thank you, Mandy - glad it gave you a laugh! Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/6/2023 4:51:00 PM

You have a tremendous sense of humor, Robert One feather indeed…..holy cow Pangie xx

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 6/7/2023 6:24:00 AM

Thank you, Pangie! I doubt that Heather found much humor in her situation! Bob H

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/6/2023 3:21:00 PM

Heather decided to dance in leather - A bra and a thong that went together - But it got so hot - Her gear slipped right off - And the crowd raised the roof for fine weather…… Belle

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/6/2023 5:12:00 PM

Thank you Robert, I enjoy replying to fun Limericks like yours, somehow I find it easier than thinking up one of my own… Belle

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 6/6/2023 4:47:00 PM

Great one, Belle - you should copy that great comment ad post it on Soup! Thanks for taking time to read my nonsense - Bob H

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2023 2:44:00 PM

hahaha Robert this is hilarious!!! wish I;d thought of it myself:-) hugs jan xx

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 6/6/2023 2:50:00 PM

Glad you got some ha-ha's from this bit of nonsense, Jan. Thanks for commenting - Bob H