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Heartless Echoes

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Falling forever through time, lonely hearts cascading… Calling echoes of ringing chime, vibes of love fading… Crawling tears facing crime, of dark streets invading… Exhaling breaths chasing climb, vertical voices escaping… Appalling words making rhyme, of thoughts are degrading... Hauling hearts wasted prime, amidst many loves parading. …this verse can be read backward… Echoes Heartless Cascading hearts lonely, time through forever falling... Fading love of vibes chime, ringing of echoes calling... Invading streets dark of crime, facing tears crawling... Escaping voices vertical climb, chasing breaths exhaling... Degrading are thoughts of rhyme, making words appalling... Parading loves many, amidst prime wasted hearts hauling. June.27.2020 Triple Rhyme Sponsored by: Beth Evans Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/15/2020 2:08:00 PM

This is a brilliant example of your outstanding creativity WW! A fave for me. From alliteration and rich words to breathtaking emotions, I hope someday I can learn this mastery of writing verses that can be read from both directions. Congratulations on your splendid win. Much love :)

James Inman

Date: 7/12/2020 10:50:00 PM

Very creative WW.

Eric Cohen

Date: 7/11/2020 2:33:00 PM

Amazing! I've never seen a palindrome poem. Well done, WW, and congrats. Eric

John Watt

Date: 7/11/2020 1:37:00 PM

Wings, you are a master of well-chosen words, and that is true again with this excellently packaged triple rhyme. Happy to see it place #1, my friend! Enjoy your weekend ~ John

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/11/2020 11:49:00 AM

WOW!!!!! Congratulations on your win. What a great write. Reading it backwards is a double WOW and amazing. I will keep this one. Enjoy your win and day..........

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/11/2020 8:40:00 AM

An amazing achievement, ^WW^, brilliantly executed, and my compliments on your top placement winning 1st Place -- Aloha~@William

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/11/2020 8:31:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win with this fine poem, WW. Janice

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/11/2020 8:12:00 AM

To share a winning place with a winged warrior is humbling. I enjoyed your write, and congratulations.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/30/2020 3:35:00 PM

Wow! What a magnificent triple rhyme, WW! YOU DA MAN! How you create these is beyond my ken! Amazing!... And so much going on in this one between love, and crime, and climbs, and parades, and OMG -- It's such a WINNER! FAVE! Bravo, gw

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/30/2020 12:54:00 PM

I like the first one...Well done

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/27/2020 4:57:00 PM

Such a beautifully written poignant poem, WW. I am amazed at how you can write these poems that can be read backward. You are an amazing talent! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/27/2020 4:53:00 PM

This is amazing WW! A Visionaries very creative vision. I have never been able to complete something as impressive as this. Kudos my friend! Blessings xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/27/2020 12:51:00 PM

Hello Winged Warrior, oh my goodness! How clever! How did you do this? I have never seen a poem like that ever. Enjoy your day my friend.