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Thanks to Richard Lamoureux for inspiring me to write in this Musette form:-)

Goodbye I’ll hide my tears Won’t cry Crying Heart is breaking Tears fall Falling In love with you Was bliss Blissful Together forever You lied Lying Sealing our fate So long Longing For the right one Some day 2,4,2 non rhyming form Contest:Mussetle Train Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux 11~30~ 2014 Title changed from heartbreak to Heartbroken for ''H'' Contest, New or Old Poems Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 11:53:00 PM

weeee! back here again... you are welcome... PD

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2015 2:33:00 AM

:-) xx Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 9:02:00 PM

lovely win...PD

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2015 1:04:00 AM

Thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan x

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/9/2015 10:39:00 PM

You wrote a fantastic poem in this challenging form, Jan...from love to heartbreak to hope, I enjoyed every stage. Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison
Date: 1/10/2015 4:05:00 AM

Thanks Rhonda I had fun with this challenging form Richard found for us:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/8/2015 12:44:00 AM

I think you've done a great job with this difficult new form. The words and images all flow so smoothly together... Congrats on the win, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/8/2015 7:50:00 AM

Thanks so much Kelly I really enjoyed the challenge Richard set us:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/5/2015 11:48:00 PM

Congrats on the win Jan...huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/6/2015 1:16:00 AM

Thanks so much Kayod5:-) Hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker

Date: 1/5/2015 7:42:00 PM

Hi Jan, Very nice...sad...but nice. Excellent win. Solid structure. Good for you. Keep up the good work. Congratulations. Earl

Jan Allison
Date: 1/6/2015 1:15:00 AM

Hi Earl I really enjoyed this challenge Earl:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/5/2015 4:09:00 PM

Hi Jan...I had not realized you had taken this train, must have missed it before. It is never that easy to find the right one! Congrats on yet another win! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2015 4:20:00 PM

I wrote this one when I was in Malta Paul :-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/5/2015 3:35:00 PM

Congratulations Jan! I am pleased to see your name on my winners list. I think you did an excellent job with the form. I hope you write more of them.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2015 4:19:00 PM

I was inspired when i saw yours Richard thanks for running the contest and for my 5th place:-) hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/4/2014 8:44:00 PM

as always jan the very beautiful pen pal

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2014 1:03:00 AM

Thanks so much Liam - love the new avatar:-) Hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 12/3/2014 7:39:00 PM

Very nice write Jan...best wishes in the contest...hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2014 4:30:00 AM

Thanks so much Joseph:-) Hugs Janxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2014 10:48:00 PM

you did so great with this way of writing. I hope I can try it out. IS this the one you mentioned in hotmail? I am still waiting for a soupmail from you on you know who.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 1:13:00 AM

I think so - new form by Richard - its fun:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2014 5:10:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Way to go with this entry..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 12/1/2014 5:12:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Ken Carroll

Date: 12/1/2014 2:10:00 PM

Well crafted emotional write Jan..Good luck!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/1/2014 2:14:00 PM

Thanks so much Ken:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/1/2014 12:14:00 PM

filled with emotive lines, jan... a flowing beauty of a piece!.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/1/2014 12:20:00 PM

Thanks Nette is is a really lovely form to attempt:-) hugs jan xx

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/1/2014 8:01:00 AM

Such a sad poem. I love that you ended it with hope. I think you have a winner!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/1/2014 11:09:00 AM

Thanks Monterey

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/1/2014 7:44:00 AM

So nice to read your writing this morning. Light & Love

Jan Allison
Date: 12/1/2014 11:09:00 AM

Thanks Debbie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/1/2014 12:27:00 AM

Excellent. Very touching. enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/1/2014 1:05:00 AM

Thanks Ravi:-) Hugs Jan x

David Meade

Date: 11/30/2014 8:14:00 PM

You talent does shine -- your love for writing is effervescent -- it flows forth from your heart! Keep writing girl and I will keep reading them.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/1/2014 1:04:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment David - believe me at the moment writing is keeping me afloat:-( Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/30/2014 5:08:00 PM

No it is not necessary for the purpose of the contest but it would please me to no end.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/30/2014 5:09:00 PM

I will keep this one in the contest but pen another one too:-) Hugs jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/30/2014 4:54:00 PM

Great job Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/30/2014 4:55:00 PM

Thanks Brenda - have a go its fun:-) Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/30/2014 4:49:00 PM

Thanks for being the first Jan, I am pleased.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/30/2014 4:55:00 PM

oops when i posted my comment to you i didn't know it was to be for a contest - do you want me to pen a new one now? Hugs jan xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/30/2014 4:36:00 PM

Love, you can't live without it but damn sometimes it hurts! Light & Love

Tim Smith

Date: 11/30/2014 3:22:00 PM

Oh is Richard having a contest? ...great ones Jan...hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 11/30/2014 3:35:00 PM

yes enter yours! Hugs jan x

Joey Peters

Date: 11/30/2014 3:18:00 PM

Fantastic words love the emotion. -Joey

Jan Allison
Date: 11/30/2014 3:36:00 PM

Thanks so much Joey:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/30/2014 3:07:00 PM

love it Jan gl in contest 7

Jan Allison
Date: 11/30/2014 3:08:00 PM

Thanks so much Shadow:-) hugs jan xx