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Heart of Words

Whom and what were so dark of heart why can't they not speak Of innocence and offering special words to others while they peek, Teach them all to see and learn new special words so they all can sing. To offer much appreciation of love and contentment to which life can bring. Can people often turn sheer desperation to expect more perfect of joy and gay Where beauty surrounds all which can create an innocence as of today. Will your hospitality lift a luminous glow of your heart like a shining bowl Being intuitive will soften your illuminating imagination as a whole, Going no where by chance and being here invites your creativeness of beautiful. Often I'm by myself, I so want to hear more of your darkness of words Words so profound and be so proud of your wise words so they can be well heard. Written: 05/01/2016

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/2/2016 2:16:00 AM

A warm Poetry Soup Welcome to you Eva! Your heartfelt poem sings of the love of humanity and the beauty of our planet. It is lovely to meet a kindred spirit. Blessings and Aloha, Connie ; ) 7

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2016 9:50:00 PM

Eva, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ava A. Carlton
Date: 5/20/2016 9:41:00 PM

Thank you so very much Skat for your beautiful welcome to this poetry soup domain... hugs Eva

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/1/2016 11:51:00 PM

Dear Eva, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.......with love.

Ava A. Carlton
Date: 5/1/2016 11:58:00 PM

Thank you so very much Manmath for your beautiful comment on this penned poem of mine and especially for welcoming me to poetry soup of poets.

Sherri Whiteford

Date: 5/1/2016 9:45:00 PM

Quite the poem you've written here Eva, so very glad I stopped by for this enjoyable read... Sherri

Ava A. Carlton
Date: 5/1/2016 11:34:00 PM

Thank you so very much Sherri for your comment on this written poem of mine.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/1/2016 9:02:00 PM

Ps... I like the way you used the rhyme form... Linda

Ava A. Carlton
Date: 5/1/2016 11:35:00 PM

Thank you so very much Linda for your nice comment on this rhyme poem of mine.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/1/2016 9:00:00 PM

Eva,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ava A. Carlton
Date: 5/1/2016 11:23:00 PM

Thank you so very much Linda for your great welcome and friendly words muchly appreciated. I really hope I do thrive with all the poets on this soups domain.