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Heart Arresting Beauty

Discretion tells me I should turn my eyes away, but with mouth agape I cannot help but gaze upon the heart arresting beauty now before me. Why does she not shy away or attempt to conceal the ravishing bouquet of her all from my stare? How could she not notice me just standing there? Does she not see me or does she simply not care? She's a vision sightless eyes would yearn to see, a goddess beyond the scope of man's conception. Her flowing sparkling auburn hair whispers eloquently to her beauty in the warm breeze occasionally hiding one of a huge pair of opulent all to consuming brown eyes. Her visually captivating voluptuous body would anguish a master Renaissance artist for no brush strokes or mixture of oils could quite capture the essence of her design. Those perfectly shaped succulent milky white... Oh! Why does that accursed demon's tormenting ring always awaken me just before I get to the best part.

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Seren Roberts

Date: 5/29/2013 11:16:00 PM

Haha, lovely poem, can imagine all the males reading hurriedly your words and groaning....Seren

Kim Morrison
Date: 5/30/2013 4:08:00 AM

I was hoping to make men groan and women laugh with this one. I could have continued my description on down to love's oasis, but I do believe I would have needed a different ending. Thank You! Glad it gave you a laugh! Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2013 9:39:00 PM

Hello Kim, I will read your blog tomorrow from work. about your poem: I know the feeling, something always seems to interrupt such dreamy dreams... , Have yourself a beautiful Memorial Day, this Monday. God bless * Always~ LINDA

Kim Morrison
Date: 5/27/2013 4:29:00 AM

As always thank you for the compliment. I was having fun being a tease with this one Sometimes I just need a break from the stronger themes I usually write about. You have a wonderful Memorial Day yourself. KIm

Randy Curry

Date: 5/26/2013 7:19:00 PM

That was the best part! Randy

Kim Morrison
Date: 5/26/2013 7:38:00 PM

It was and if I had kept going the only one that would have published this is Larry Flint. Ha!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/26/2013 2:43:00 PM

Rhapsodic in content and form... Awesome lines arrest the senses; well done!.:) huggs

Kim Morrison
Date: 5/26/2013 4:44:00 PM

Thank you! Nette

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2013 9:38:00 AM

- Beautiful poem, Kim! - Thank you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Morrison
Date: 5/26/2013 4:44:00 PM

Always love your comments! Thanks Anne Lise

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/26/2013 5:56:00 AM

;) What an amazing ending to this tale! Yes...that ring has been a problem many a time! Glad you had a lovely dream, Kim. Great write.

Kim Morrison
Date: 5/26/2013 10:05:00 AM

Ha! Ha! Well I could have went beyond the best or the breast part, but if I had moved down to love's oasis I would have had to completely change the ending. Kim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/26/2013 9:04:00 AM

Just before you get to the best part or the breast part.....;-)

Kim Morrison
Date: 5/26/2013 6:05:00 AM

Yes, it certainly has been a problem. Thank You Eileen I always appreciate your comments. I thought about calling this one dream girl or something like that, but I did not want to give away my cute ending.