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He Was the One

his strength i saw when he was near me, amongst tumbleweeds in mid-June – up and o’er dusk i was set free, under the stardust comforting the moon adrift the glaze of glamourous skies, singing an aria of a cradlesong tune, with a melody playing in chestnut eyes, adrift the reverie of love’s surprise; roaming the wonder of what might be, remembering our decree with guarantee angel eyes devoid goodbyes, man once too great for my debris- of all the death daggered in demise, HE ALWAYS MEANT THE MOST TO ME
_______________________________________ 1.18.20

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Date: 1/19/2020 6:00:00 PM
I’m sure he’s glad to still be here. ;0)
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Date: 1/19/2020 6:03:00 AM
Glad it is fictional, very emotive..
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Date: 1/18/2020 11:33:00 AM
Very nice Laura full of emotion, "man once too great for my debris" so much said in so few words, glad this is just a write!
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