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He Never Felt It

"He Never Felt It". I walk lost without my soul I will find it searching alone he never felt it Today I feel unnatural ugly lost my beauty I'll look weeping he never felt it. Now I am in need of somebody wipe away one tear out of billions he never felt it. Isolation from love is slowing down towards him my depth got sick lonely he never felt it. I searched why explanation was satisfactory I am out of love He never felt it. Confusion without love erupted in tremendous pain attacked my heart he never felt it. Therese Bacha 24 June 2013

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Date: 11/4/2013 5:58:00 PM
Very touching poetry. The title pulled me in and I was not disappointed. Thankyou for this wonderful read.
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Date: 7/29/2013 4:12:00 PM
very nicely done Terry ;} you have a blessed day .
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Date: 6/29/2013 6:33:00 PM
Hi Terry; this is very touching and a gem of a poem. Thank you for sharing with us...... Lucilla
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Therese Bacha
Date: 6/29/2013 9:34:00 PM
Hi Lucy, thanks, see u tomorrow. hope better. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 6/28/2013 11:30:00 PM
Hello Therese! This is marvelous as a poem, emotional, dynamic, touching! Hope you are fine!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 6/29/2013 9:35:00 PM
Whoa, thank you my dear friend. I love your compliments, they encourage me to write. Take care. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 6/25/2013 6:13:00 PM
Hello T.....this is very melancholy.... but I love it..
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Therese Bacha
Date: 6/25/2013 6:29:00 PM
Hi Donna, yes it was one of those days. But I am fine. Thank you so much. Love T. xoxo
Date: 6/25/2013 3:15:00 PM
Hi dear friend..We all have our ways of showing love differently.Many times we feel rejected by those we love most..They take us forgranted..Sometimes we just need to pour our emotions and feelings with those special someones xause manytimes they do not realize they are neglecting us.I read a book'men are from mars-women are from venus'and it describes so well the difference in the way a man and woman acts.I feel you a bit sad..Here s a big hug-Charma
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Therese Bacha
Date: 6/25/2013 4:05:00 PM
Hello my friend, Thank you for your beautiful message. I was in one of those moods. I am fine now. My love to princess. Hope you are doing good. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 6/24/2013 11:33:00 PM
This is lovely but sad.....People are often insensitive when we most need it....hope you heal...
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Therese Bacha
Date: 6/25/2013 4:03:00 PM
Hi Eileen. I just in one of those moods. Much better today. Thank you so much for passing by. Love Terry xo
Date: 6/24/2013 9:54:00 PM
From your beautiful mind to my soul Therese.So many of your poems touch me.And every time I see your picture on poerty soup I pause to send you a good thought.I was19 at Woodstock and I still beleave in people and flower power. Please read my poem Truth Is My Addiction. Thats how I move forward now that I am alone.Open heart Open Eye always. Be happy.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 6/25/2013 4:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Michael, you are one of a kind, strong, tenacious. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. Hope you will always be happy. Stay strong. Life is beautiful. Love Terry xo
Date: 6/24/2013 9:08:00 PM
Wow Therese, you have progressed wonderfully into a very awesome poet my friend! I have been under the weather lately, some sort of lingering cold, so I have had a hard time responding to everyone's poetry! But I do get around to it, might not be right away though! Oh I'm also in school now, fun fun! It's for a creative writing degree with a specialization in poetry! I'm excited about it, and my first assignment is to write a poem based on summer! I've written it already, well, Great Work!!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 6/24/2013 9:27:00 PM
Hello my dearest friend, so glad you are ok. Whoa a pupil again, its great for you, maybe one day we can read your poem. Good Luck my friend, stay healthy. Missed you. Love Terry xoxo

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