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The spiral staircase made her high heels sing Her soft silhouette was mesmerizing The orchestrated trills were riveting He would not have missed this for anything She slowly turned spotlighted to the crowd Which, along with drum intro, drove them wild Her sultry voice and entertainment style Rocked the arena for many a mile From here the City churches pierced the mist A scene no photographer could resist Heck with the order to cease and desist Taping her performance, he blew a kiss Stars twinkled and music filled the night air For him to make money seemed only fair Video, in its case, was marked with flare He closed it, and, now smiling, crossed the square Promptly arrested and taken to jail He called his ex-wife to help him make bail Her sultry voice told him to go to hell May 18, 2018 One, Nine and Sixteen Upgrade by Viv Wigley* Sixth Place *Line one - 'The spiral staircase made her high heels sing' Line nine - 'From here the City churches pierced the mist' Line sixteen - 'He closed it, and, now smiling, crossed the square'

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Date: 6/22/2018 9:38:00 AM
Love this! Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 6/22/2018 1:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/22/2018 3:26:00 AM
Thanks so much!
Date: 6/20/2018 11:36:00 PM
Congratulations Susan, Tom
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/21/2018 12:31:00 AM
Thanks, Tom! Congrats to you too! :)
Date: 5/19/2018 3:17:00 PM
So clever your way to work in the lines so flawlessly !! Well done, Susan!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/20/2018 1:25:00 AM
Thank you, Carrie!
Date: 5/19/2018 3:04:00 PM
Really nicely done, another contest piece that deserves the top spot.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/20/2018 1:25:00 AM
Awww... you are sweet. We will see. Thank you though.
Date: 5/19/2018 9:52:00 AM
oh my, I love how you worked in the words and that last Awesome line, Susan!!!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/20/2018 1:24:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 5/19/2018 6:27:00 AM
Smartly written and wildly entertaining to read Susan, Thank you for sharing, have a great day
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/20/2018 1:23:00 AM
Thank you, Pixie.
Date: 5/19/2018 6:21:00 AM
The given lines flow smoothly in your wonderful story..hope you win BIG, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/20/2018 1:23:00 AM
Thank you!

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