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Harmonious Flow Cl

On paths of frozen ice and snow With bitter cold air all around I just seek to know, where to go To make it work with what I found To walk quiet, without a sound Of cracking ice and things I know Snow piled in burdens by the pound Waiting for harmonious flow 1/21/20 Entry for Oh-no A Twisted Char-Lay Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Date: 2/16/2020 7:05:00 PM
A lovely wintertime write, Heidi. Don't forget your warm mittens! Congrats on your win ~ John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/17/2020 8:53:00 AM
Thank you John :) Yes, I must remember my warm mittens !
Date: 2/16/2020 4:47:00 PM
While waiting for 'harmonious flow,' you'd already created it with this prize-winning poem. Congrats, Heidi. :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/16/2020 5:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. I am happy to hear that :)
Date: 2/16/2020 1:31:00 PM
A gorgeous write, Heidi. This flows so well...Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/16/2020 2:20:00 PM
Thank you very much Charlie. I appreciate the opportunity and your kind feedback :)
Date: 2/15/2020 9:57:00 AM
I like your poem Heidi. And it is bitter cold right now.
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Date: 2/15/2020 10:13:00 AM
I am happy you like it. ..thank you. And it is bitter cold here right now too! Stay warm :)
Date: 1/29/2020 10:50:00 AM
Beautifully done, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/29/2020 11:40:00 AM
Thank you for your support. Have a nice day today :)
Date: 1/25/2020 8:29:00 AM
Really enjoyed your Splendid write, Heidi.. So inspirational! As always your talent shines, dear Poetess.. Have a blessed day!
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Date: 1/25/2020 9:38:00 AM
I am happy that you find this to be inspirational. Thank you for your visit and your kindness Robertina. I also hope you have a blessed day :)
Date: 1/24/2020 1:13:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, Heidi:-) Thoroughly enjoyed! GL on Charles' contest!
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Date: 1/24/2020 1:19:00 PM
I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you Edward :)
Date: 1/22/2020 1:22:00 PM
Heidi..this is gorgeous... My best thought for a win. PanagiotaXUX
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Date: 1/22/2020 3:07:00 PM
Oh, thank you so much Panagiota. I appreciate your support. :)
Date: 1/22/2020 6:54:00 AM
No reason to wait for " harmonious flow" for it runs throughout your poem dearest, Heidi! Hugs xxx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/22/2020 8:13:00 AM
That is kind of you to say Demetrios. Thank you very much :)
Date: 1/21/2020 11:13:00 PM
Ah yes, a metaphor of life. Problems seem to always find a way of working themselves out. Nice to read you again my dear:)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/22/2020 8:12:00 AM
Nice to see you again DT. How are you? I hope all is well and your New Year is a great one ! Thank you for your visit and comment :)
Date: 1/21/2020 7:02:00 PM
Nothing like the zone (perhaps zen?!) of that harmonious flow. Can't be rushed. Has to come to you. Nicely done, Heidi! Warm wishes, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/22/2020 8:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Gershon :)
Date: 1/21/2020 4:54:00 PM
This poem is pure essence of "harmonious flow". It's very beautiful and tranquil. Your imagery really sets the scene and the rhyme pulls you in further. Really like this one!
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Date: 1/22/2020 8:11:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind feedback :) Have a great day!
Date: 1/21/2020 4:54:00 PM
Yours is a lovely poem to read, Heidi, I can just picture it. We never get any snow here! Regards // paul
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Date: 1/22/2020 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Paul. I am happy to see your comment. Wow, no snow where you are! I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 1/21/2020 4:43:00 PM
Hi Heidi, good one my friend, best wishes...
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Date: 1/22/2020 8:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Charlie. Nice to see you and happy New Year ! :)
Date: 1/21/2020 2:33:00 PM
Love your winter image Heidi, only rain here at the moment. Good luck
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Date: 1/21/2020 3:29:00 PM
Thank you Tom. I am happy to hear that. Stay dry, my friend! :)
Date: 1/21/2020 1:09:00 PM
Great imagery...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2020 2:03:00 PM
Thank you Silent One :)
Date: 1/21/2020 12:31:00 PM
Beautifully done my friend. This paint a wonderful winter scene. Best wishes in the contest
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2020 12:40:00 PM
Thank you Chris. I appreciate your kind comment and support :)
Date: 1/21/2020 12:27:00 PM
- A beautiful paths with blanket of snow and ice - Walk gently, Heidi :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2020 12:39:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise. Ok, I will :)
Date: 1/21/2020 12:14:00 PM
Well written Heidi--those rhymes are not easy. You captured beautifully --the hush of the day in bitter cold. Lovely imagery.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2020 12:39:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your kind feedback :)