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Notes: This is a collaboration between myself and Darren White to wish Tim Smith a Happy Birthday. We attempted to write a poem in a similar style to his writings! Cheers

Candles in the wind Time blows within our hearts when young ones leave our nest we love the memories, but feel a little less life is not a dream, it's a test Waking, to the calls of morn alone, a coffee and with buttered scone on the windowsill I sit observing the empty nest they've flown away, is natures way my heart yearns for time to never stray I wish the phone would ring, does anyone care if only there would be someone calling whose caress would say "I'm there" When love is all you ever knew being alone tears and burns all through My candle flickers, it's wick softly glows while i watch them fly to where the current blows be safe little mourning doves, I wait for you at home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/3/2017 11:10:00 PM
Wow you two - this is a perfect Tim poem <3 very nice! :)
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Date: 12/3/2017 8:24:00 PM
Really wonderful poem, Arthur...sweet emotion
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Date: 12/3/2017 4:50:00 PM
Lovely job, you two. WAs this at the blog? I seem to recall it. Let me make sure I commented at the blog!!
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Date: 12/3/2017 9:12:00 AM
This is beautiful guys...you sure I didn't write it : ))
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Date: 12/3/2017 8:48:00 AM
Yes those are special words for a special person. It's a great way to say happy birthday. So Happy Birthday Tim!
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Date: 12/3/2017 2:17:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful words. Happy birthday Tim Smith. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 12/3/2017 1:18:00 AM
Poetry smiles in the lines ... sublime ...
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Date: 12/3/2017 12:38:00 AM
Wonderful pen you two :) birthday wishes for you Tim :) xomo x3
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Date: 12/3/2017 12:34:00 AM
Wonderful photo you chose Art! Happy Birthday Tim, my dear friend <3
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Date: 12/2/2017 11:50:00 PM
Happy, happy birthday, although the nest is empty , the migration will bring the flock closer if only for a parting time again, to repeat the cycle. Nice and chrisp message.
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Date: 12/2/2017 10:12:00 PM
Very lovely words and a kind birthday gift.
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Date: 12/2/2017 9:22:00 PM
Wow, perfect finish to a GREAT poem, guys!
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Date: 12/2/2017 8:48:00 PM
Wow great word's.....enjoy your day Tim...Seren
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