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Happiness

Hands twisted in happiness. Just the two of us. The taste of you excites me to no end. Dripping from my fingers. Drooling from my lips. I love the smell of you. The thought of tasting you. The taste of you on me. Draws me into you. Now don't tell me You don't like the taste of CINNABONS too! 1:14pm friday 7/ 24/ 2015

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Niall Fulham

Date: 6/17/2017 5:40:00 PM

Hi Debbie , in apple pie yum great write:)))hugs

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/13/2015 3:45:00 AM

Very funny--yes. Food becomes more and more of a source of pleasure for us. And of course, my mind being what it is, was thinking of something else. However now I can laugh for the whole day.

Mike A.

Date: 10/12/2015 10:22:00 PM

The best Cinnabons poems I have ever read.

Kevin Fairbrother

Date: 9/3/2015 6:38:00 PM

Beautiful Debbie, makes you want to be entwined whilst the words flow. Cheers

Paul Callus

Date: 8/25/2015 3:33:00 PM

You tease and you tempt, Debbie:) Good final twist...Cinnabons!! Mmmmm // paul

Constance La France

Date: 8/11/2015 9:11:00 AM

Debbie this is deliciously delightful, a yummy 7 and thanks for visiting my ritz poem

Len Gasun

Date: 8/6/2015 8:42:00 AM

:))))Great image of happiness in your wonderful poem my dear friend, Debbie. I thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing. Thanks you so much as well for your precious time reading one of my humble writes. Have a great day! love lots and big hug, Leonora

James Fraser

Date: 7/28/2015 3:40:00 PM

Haha, nice one Debbie, caught me out, hugs//James :) :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2015 3:40:00 PM

debbie, you asked if I am still in Iowa. Sadly, no. Look for the poem I wrote on Utah's state flag and gull. That is for the contest of JUdy's! I hope to see YOUR state poem soon: either CA or IA. It's up to you. I lived five years in CA and loved it, from '85 to '90. Was in the SF earthquake!!

Elizabeth Agiantritis

Date: 7/27/2015 7:35:00 AM

Great ending! Didn't see that one coming :-)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/25/2015 8:22:00 AM

I like the image of happiness this conjured up prior to the cinnabons arriving on the scene. *lol*! Perhaps I will arrange some combined happiness.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2015 11:55:00 PM

haha, this looks like something I would write on happiness. Cinnabons are to die for. they even have ice cream of it!!! LOVE This.