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Hairpins

mother’s hairpins wait patiently in worn, loose clumps for her to pick through and use over and over, night after night it seems to be the same she, by the bathroom counter day after day twirling her fine, grey hair around thin, frail fingers and so expertly done, too without a thought her dim eyes stare into a dim mirror that reflects her lined, aging face once young and beautiful she creates curls as she stands alone 2/23/2022

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Date: 4/10/2022 9:01:00 PM
Laura, your words add such dignity to this commonplace act. I love your personifying the hairpins as they await the predictable movements of your mother. It may be an ordinary daily ritual, but you have introduced a philosophical pondering of aging, beauty, and loneliness. Love what you did here! Blessings ~ John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/10/2022 9:22:00 PM
Thanks for reading this simple free verse, John. I want to develop my free verse into something meaningful, as we discussed at church. Looking forward to more of your insights, and thanks again for your encouragement! :)
Date: 3/6/2022 11:54:00 AM
wow, you painted a picture that we can so easily imagine!! I love this. It's my idea of FINE free verse.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/6/2022 4:19:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! I’m happy you liked this one! :)
Date: 3/5/2022 11:51:00 PM
Hi Laura....the image of your mother you have painted is so life like. I see her standing before the mirror and it reflecting her aged but graceful face !
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/6/2022 4:18:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa! So happy you liked this! :)
Date: 3/1/2022 11:43:00 PM
Excellent job a painting a picture of habit, Laura. I could remember my mother in her old age doing the same. Hugs, Bill
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/3/2022 3:39:00 PM
Thank you, Bill! So happy you liked this one! :)
Date: 2/25/2022 11:58:00 AM
Like knitting your mom does her hair without thought from years of practice.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/25/2022 3:24:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! She has practiced this to perfection. Lol! :)
Date: 2/25/2022 8:39:00 AM
wow, I would so love to see a painting with these words dear Laura, stunning , simply stunning :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/25/2022 3:23:00 PM
Thank you, Vie! Your praise means a lot to me! :)
Date: 2/25/2022 2:41:00 AM
If only someone could tell so much taking as small as a word like hairpins, it's you!! Just loved the hidden philosophy!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/25/2022 3:22:00 PM
Thank you, Swetha! Happy you liked this! :)
Date: 2/24/2022 11:07:00 AM
But at least she is still with you! Aloha!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/24/2022 11:17:00 AM
Yes, though she lives far way. Thanks for commenting, Rico. :)
Date: 2/23/2022 6:47:00 PM
Yes...stand alone...in the end we must all do this, before our God, and he will say: "Silly, you were never alone." Profound write!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/23/2022 7:17:00 PM
That’s very true, Joe. Mom has great faith, and loves the Lord. Interesting that you extrapolated a spiritual dimension from the ending. Thanks for commenting! :)

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