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in my childhood bed near midnight train rumbles past-- bison stampede dream

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Date: 3/22/2021 8:58:00 PM
lovely imagery ~ not calming but lovely ~ lol
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 3/23/2021 4:19:00 PM
Yes, thank you. And like Eve Roper said, it is more of a senryu, anyway.
Date: 1/17/2021 4:07:00 AM
What a dream!
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Date: 12/25/2020 10:18:00 PM
good Senryu, Carol, like the imagery of the child
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