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Haiku 96

snowflakes drop slowly cover the streets all in white foot prints in the snow warm glow of the sun melting ice on barren trees dagger icicles

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/11/2023 1:30:00 PM

Your "haiku 96" is a lovely write. Have a great day.................

Jim Slaughter

Date: 12/27/2022 10:16:00 AM

These are very beautiful, Phyllis.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/28/2022 11:09:00 AM

Thank you Jim. Wishing you the best for the new year. love phyl

Fj Thomas

Date: 12/19/2022 3:57:00 PM

Beautiful daggers, but daggers nonetheless! Lol hello Phyl!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/26/2022 10:18:00 AM

Thanks so nice to see your name on my haiku. Wishing you and your family a wonderful holiday season. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2022 1:12:00 PM

hi, my friend. That last line is really awesome with the dagger image!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/7/2022 1:39:00 PM

Thanks Andrea and nice to see your name my friend. Figure I better wake the muse up before it really does go into a winter slumber. haha love phyl

Silent One

Date: 12/4/2022 10:52:00 AM

Vivid imagery in your haiku..

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/5/2022 12:30:00 PM

Thank you S1 for your comment. winter can be different daily with drastic changes. Great to look at it out the window at this time. Have a great day. love phyl

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 12/4/2022 2:04:00 AM

Nicely put- Dagger icicles! Elizabeth

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/5/2022 12:28:00 PM

Thank you for your comment. It can look dangerous at times especially if it is a place where the water drips. Have a wonderful day. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/3/2022 10:56:00 AM

- It's beautiful to look at through the window, dear Phyllis ... I don't like winter ... either with or without snow ... - A lovely haiku :) - hugs

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/5/2022 12:26:00 PM

Thanks AnneLise. It is beautiful to look at but like you do not care for winter. One good things no insects to swat. lol love phyl