Haiku 95

Haiku 95 sun on your silver hair fine as spider’s web in autumn light

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Date: 10/21/2013 7:11:00 PM

gorgeous!!

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/21/2013 7:27:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I appreciate the compliment... Jack

Date: 10/16/2013 4:18:00 PM

- No Linda ..... it's ME!!!! ....lol :)))) - Beautiful picture, Jack! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/16/2013 4:22:00 PM

being older has its rewards... Jack

Date: 10/15/2013 4:13:00 PM

Jack, this is me.... the warmer season gives and ages with reality. ...enjoyed. ..linda

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/15/2013 4:27:00 PM

Indeed it does. Thanks for reading it and commenting... Jack

Date: 10/15/2013 9:26:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Jack! "Hair fine as spider's web"...fantastic.

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/15/2013 9:57:00 AM

Thanks, Drake. Maybe writing it was a function of being older myself. Hmmm... Jack