Haiku 94

Haiku 94 morning tiptoed along slow water winding ways

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/16/2013 4:15:00 PM

- Very nice haiku, Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/16/2013 4:19:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. It's always nice to hear from you... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/15/2013 4:15:00 PM

wow, the perfect imagery... tender and peacefully. I've never seen a haiku in one line....but, I see and feel the...shhhh!...enjoyed. ..linda

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/15/2013 4:26:00 PM

Thanks, Linda. One-line haiku appear to be common these days, and are seen in prominent haiku journals. It seems to me that the ability to play with the words is richer... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2013 12:06:00 AM

this is just beautiful!

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/15/2013 8:29:00 AM

Than you for the comment. One of my more peaceful moments... Jack

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/14/2013 11:19:00 AM

Similar to the paths we walk each day in our hearts. Awesome.

Jack Jordan
Date: 10/14/2013 11:34:00 AM

You're absolutely right: slowly, thoughtfully... Jack