Haiku 82

Haiku 82 barefoot summer boys hot asphalt streets bubbling tar blister careless feet

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Date: 9/16/2013 3:15:00 PM

I remember those days, and now wear shoes. Great write.

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/16/2013 4:53:00 PM

Me too, on both counts... Jack

Date: 9/12/2013 12:33:00 AM

Yikes. you hit the nail on the head.

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/12/2013 7:55:00 AM

My feet remember it well, and not fondly... Jack

Date: 9/7/2013 2:04:00 PM

summer blisters!.. nothing short of superb, jack.. you write 'ku with such ease..:) huggs

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/7/2013 2:53:00 PM

Thanks you, Nette. That means a lost, coming from you... Jack

Date: 9/6/2013 4:44:00 PM

.... Sounded painfully this too .... well done, Jack! - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/6/2013 4:53:00 PM

I really was painful. We all had to be very careful... Jack

Date: 9/6/2013 4:08:00 PM

Cute..I remember those days...typo careless? If for the contest..its a winner. BG

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/6/2013 4:36:00 PM

Yes, a typo... Thanks... Jack