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Haiku 82

heavy summer rain upon the new planted garden drinking refreshments rose petals scarlet red her ruby lips summer birds and bees gather at the raspberries a feast paradise

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/12/2020 4:59:00 AM

Very creative use of this form. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 8/6/2020 1:49:00 PM

A delightful string of haiku, Phyllis. Each image vies for attention. ~ Regards // paul

Michael Thompson

Date: 8/4/2020 9:53:00 AM

A lovely poem you have written Phyllis

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/5/2020 3:19:00 PM

Thanks for your comment Michael. love phyl

Judy Ball

Date: 7/30/2020 1:59:00 PM

Well Done my friend. Very nice imagery here. God Bless, JB

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/31/2020 5:56:00 PM

Thanks Judy hope all is well around your area. love phyl

Jack Horne

Date: 7/10/2020 2:47:00 PM

as always, I love your haiku, my friend. I hope you are all well & that all is still OK in your part of Canada (we're gradually emerging here) x

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/18/2020 12:26:00 PM

Hi my friend hope all is well in your part of the world. We are doing okay keeping the virus numbers down but hibernating like the bears. lol Opened most things except for anything with big crowds. love phyl

Silent One

Date: 7/4/2020 3:51:00 PM

The petals love rain... But not too much... Sunshine after rain is lovely

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/18/2020 12:24:00 PM

Thanks S1 had me smiling with your comment as it rained last night and sun is shining today. Have a nice weekend. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2020 10:36:00 PM

love the imagery of red, especially the last one with raspberries in the feast!!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/18/2020 12:23:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. Hope all is well with you. love phyl