Haiku 74

Haiku 74 sunlight’s splendid spectral ribbons between clouds summer storm clears

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Skat A

Date: 8/21/2013 1:16:00 PM

a lovely view on any summer day. ....SKAT

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/21/2013 1:34:00 PM

Thanks, SKAT. It's on of my very favorite natural phenomena... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2013 10:58:00 AM

Good day Jack, it was fun reading your poems this morning... xox...~ Linda

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/16/2013 1:05:00 PM

Have a good weekend...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2013 9:59:00 AM

read a lot of bad haiku, even my own. That is why I complimented your haiku this morning. ..this is actually one of the best I read from you this morning... Well I did super love the "Haiku Days" by you. thanks for making waves and light... always~ Linda

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/16/2013 10:13:00 AM

Thanks, as always... Jack

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/11/2013 5:26:00 PM

Your title gives nothing away, it's all left up to the words, oh what great words.

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/11/2013 6:39:00 PM

Thank you, Scott. I appreciate the good comment... Jack

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/10/2013 12:19:00 PM

All blue skys here in Kelowna. We could probably use a bit of rain to reduce the fire danger.

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/10/2013 4:17:00 PM

What a beautiful place you live in! I've always wanted to live somewhere with an actual horizon other than flat. I seem destined for flatness though. Oh well... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/10/2013 12:15:00 PM

- Come home from the fantastic sunrise and sunset 22 hours ago ..... (Turkey) - A beautiful haiku, Jack! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/10/2013 12:18:00 PM

Thanks again... I'm going to have to investigate Turkey. You certainly seem to have a good time there... Jack