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Haiku

HAIKU Peepers chirp love songs Looking for single misses, Blue Heron stands waiting.

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J Hamilton Gist
Date: 1/9/2018 4:55:00 PM
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Deep one here!
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/9/2018 5:56:00 PM
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Especially for the heron:) Oliver
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/26/2017 11:42:00 PM
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Well penned. But last line should have 5 syllables. Merry Christmas
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 12/27/2017 6:33:00 PM
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Hello Anisha, Thank you. Glad you liked the Haiku. Thank you for pointing out my error. It should end Heron stands watching. When I started Haiku I was wedded to the Japanese form. I have taken classes and read since that many writers have gotten away from the 5-7-5. Thanks again Oliver
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Elaine George
Date: 1/11/2016 1:47:00 PM
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EXCELLENT HAIKU, Oliver. Elaine
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/11/2016 4:33:00 PM
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Glad you liked it Elaine. Thanks Oliver
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Cona Adams
Date: 1/11/2016 5:04:00 AM
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Love it!
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/11/2016 4:33:00 PM
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Glad you liked it Cona Thanks Oliver
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Skat A
Date: 12/19/2015 5:49:00 PM
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awesome haiku **SKAT**
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 12/19/2015 11:46:00 PM
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Thank you Skat, glad you liked it. Oliver

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