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clear cool blue water the sunshine hot on my back flip flops in the sand ©donna jones

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2014 12:30:00 PM

Donna, ------ ~ Did you really think I'd leave without stopping by to say Good-bye. Never, Muwahahahaha! Why the word alone sounds -forever and difficult. LOL, I love this place and the poets. A couple of soup friends and I are taking a short vacation. REMEMBER! The Best Thing About Leaving is the "RETURN." I will leave in good faith, in hopes you don't forget me, and you are looking forward in having me visit you and your poems in the future. HAHA, I will bring a new me when I return. "I Can't wait to see you again:) If you ever want me to read a certain poem or you wish to say hi... Drop by my E-Mail Address. apoetdestroyer@yahoo.com :) Sincerely yours ~Always & Forever~ The Sweet Poet Destroyer

Peter Dome

Date: 12/30/2013 6:15:00 PM

Wonderful write so visual. well done. hope your ok. warm best wishes. Pete.

Donna Jones
Date: 12/31/2013 6:55:00 AM

Thanks Peter! I'm doing fine....except for the cold..burrr

Jeremy Martin

Date: 8/29/2013 2:23:00 AM

Oh summer.....sigh. Alas, she is no more (almost). Lovely haiku! I'm back (for however long) :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/19/2013 4:57:00 PM

I do love the haiku ;}

Jack Jordan

Date: 8/12/2013 1:24:00 PM

Very nice! As Richard says, a good mental vacation. Haven't heard from you in a while. I hope all is well. BTW, I like your new photo a lot... Jack

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/8/2013 3:40:00 PM

dropped back to see if any new poems. either way I enjoyed this serene piece again, a mental trip to the beach.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/7/2013 9:52:00 PM

Very vivid images. I like! Always, Laura

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/7/2013 6:30:00 AM

can see it Donna feel the sun nicely done Shadow x smiles

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/6/2013 9:30:00 AM

what a heady feel, this one, donns... you make me reel!.:) huggs

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/5/2013 2:25:00 PM

Simple pleasures are the best. Your depiction surely passed that test. :)

Benjamin David

Date: 8/5/2013 2:04:00 AM

Quaint and adorable! I loved it, well done!

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/4/2013 5:32:00 PM

Awww summer... best time of the year! Love it my dear Donna lady! Big hugs, Jack-o! xoxox

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/3/2013 10:42:00 PM

Love the images, Donna..nice haiku!!

Constance La France

Date: 8/3/2013 7:39:00 AM

Donna, a lovely haiku gives one a sense of peace and tranquility, well done, Constance

Donna Jones
Date: 8/3/2013 5:27:00 PM

Than you very much....

Jancarl Campi

Date: 8/3/2013 7:02:00 AM

A nice haiku. Sure wish I were there. At least, I can dream .ake care, Jancarl

Donna Jones
Date: 8/3/2013 5:33:00 PM

Thanks........feels great! :-)

Richard Ferry

Date: 8/2/2013 6:10:00 PM

Hate shoes myself....Flipflops most of the time..Nice image

Donna Jones
Date: 8/3/2013 5:40:00 PM

Thanks Richard...

Richard Ferry

Date: 8/2/2013 6:09:00 PM

Hate shoes myself....Flipflops most of the time..Nice image

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/2/2013 5:47:00 PM

Hi Donna, I like the new photo, you look very relaxed. Thanks for your visit and comment today.

Donna Jones
Date: 8/3/2013 5:48:00 PM

Thanks Richard...just a squeezed down version of my bio pic..... and I always enjoy your work...

The Situation

Date: 8/2/2013 10:36:00 AM

wish i was there

Donna Jones
Date: 8/3/2013 5:50:00 PM

Maybe we should all go.....:-)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/2/2013 7:11:00 AM

This is very nice Donna. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Donna Jones
Date: 8/3/2013 5:51:00 PM

Thank you Lucilla

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/2/2013 6:30:00 AM

Nicely penned Donna.I envision a caribbean scenery here,afterall I am from the caribbean.

Donna Jones
Date: 8/3/2013 5:52:00 PM

Bet it is lovely!!!!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/2/2013 3:15:00 AM

Soup mail...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2013 1:30:00 AM

I love this and the images it evokes.

Donna Jones
Date: 8/3/2013 5:52:00 PM

Thanks Andrea....nice to see you...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2013 5:00:00 PM

Ahh!!! Reads like a fun day at the beach maybe..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Donna Jones
Date: 8/3/2013 5:53:00 PM

Thank you Sara..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/1/2013 1:59:00 PM

- That's how it is on my holiday ... well written Donna. - (I'm on vacation). All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones
Date: 8/3/2013 5:27:00 PM

Hope you are having a wonderful time....