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Haiku 66 opening lotus our intimate exchange dew on petals

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/23/2013 5:59:00 AM

cool, Jack!

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/23/2013 7:46:00 AM

Thank you, James, for reading and commenting... Jack

Mitch White

Date: 7/23/2013 5:13:00 AM

Yes the lotus. Great vision of the moment. Congrats to you.

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/23/2013 7:46:00 AM

Thank you, Mitch. I appreciate your reading it... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2013 11:19:00 PM

Whoaaaa. THIS IS GREAT STUFF. A super well deserved win, And congrats.

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/23/2013 7:45:00 AM

Well, thanks a lot. It means a lot coming from a friend... Jack

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/22/2013 6:37:00 PM

oooh la la! http://haikujournal.org/submissions/ I think you are ready to publish try here Jack! Light & Love

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/22/2013 8:50:00 PM

Thanks, Debbie. I will... Jack

Kash Poet

Date: 7/22/2013 11:27:00 AM

Very nice Jack.Congrats on the win.

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/22/2013 12:12:00 PM

Thanks you, Kash. Jack

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/22/2013 6:27:00 AM

Jack congratulations on your fantastic Haiku and win. Well deserve. Warm Smiles, Connie

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/22/2013 9:46:00 AM

Thanks, Connie. I'm checking on photos today... Jack

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2013 5:30:00 AM

Very creative work..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/22/2013 9:45:00 AM

Thanks for the congrats, Sara... Jack

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/22/2013 2:41:00 AM

Ditto to your comment Jake...Honored to share the spot with you and your beautiful, sensual haiku...I think PD is a very wise judge, don't you? - Tim

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/22/2013 9:45:00 AM

Thanks, Tim. I agree with you about Linda, not to mention her extraordinary contributions to poetry soup... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2013 1:01:00 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality Jack - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/22/2013 9:43:00 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise... Jack

Donna Jones

Date: 7/21/2013 9:19:00 PM

Wow Jack...nice description....congratulations

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/21/2013 10:06:00 PM

Thank you, Donna, and congrats to you too... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 7:51:00 PM

Howdy, Jack :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/21/2013 9:13:00 PM

Linda, This is quite an honor, coming from you. Thanks... I'm honored... Jack