Haiku 58

Haiku 58 #5 downtown train tattoo on his forearm: We all We got the truth: we are all we got rock, solid

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Date: 7/12/2013 10:38:00 PM

we are what we are... and so far, my movements, are away from what makes me afraid... enjoying :-)...PD

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/12/2013 11:23:00 PM

Then you are moving in the right direction... Jack

Date: 7/6/2013 11:22:00 PM

another rock solid image... enjoyed...Linda

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/7/2013 6:28:00 AM

Thanks again. It was actually quite a moving experience... Jack

Date: 6/28/2013 6:59:00 PM

this is awesome. SOLID!!

Date: 6/27/2013 7:06:00 PM

Original....creative, nice, Jack! Jimbo

Jack Jordan
Date: 6/27/2013 9:54:00 PM

Thanks! I appreciate your comment... Jack

Date: 6/27/2013 8:52:00 AM

enjoyed your haiku, why does this remind me of baseball??, I'm thinking of that movie lol, enjoyed your write, .. ~always, Linda

Date: 6/27/2013 6:18:00 AM

I see what you did here. Excellent job!

Jack Jordan
Date: 6/27/2013 6:38:00 AM

Thanks for the comment, Drake... Jack