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Haiku 55

sunlight dims the grey strands in her deep black hair as she smiles, a girl again

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Date: 1/26/2021 12:00:00 PM
Warmly succinct, an endearing haiku. I "see"her so clearly. Aqua M.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/27/2021 7:37:00 AM
Ah, if you can see her, Aqua, then the poem works-- thank you so much! [love the pen name]

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