Haiku 3

Sweet scent fills the air Yellow faces lift skyward Butterflies descend

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 9/14/2016 3:18:00 PM

Enthralled by this Haiku, Shane! You've mastered the art of the Haiku; with but a few words you can paint an entire scene. Best to you, my dear friend! With love, Mikki

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/18/2016 4:34:00 AM

Sun flowers, more than any other flowers, seem almost human the way they all turn toward the sun. A very lovely haiku. I enjoyed your haiku trio very much Shane. Aloha, Connie 7

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 6/4/2016 8:00:00 AM

3 enchanting lines.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/4/2016 12:29:00 AM

Beautiful imagery Shane I especially love the middle line:-) hugs Jan xx7

Shane Cooper
Date: 6/4/2016 1:28:00 AM

Thanks Jan, I am so happy for you about your poem. Proud to have you as a friend. Love Shane xxx