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Haiku 3-5-3

HAIKU 3-5-3
Green grass grows exponentially. Time to mow.
May 2, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/3/2018 2:53:00 PM
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This is a fine haiku, I want you to somehow make it longer. This means it's touched me.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/3/2018 3:23:00 PM
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Thank you Caren. Glad you liked it. I originally wrote it for a contest titled Haiku 3-5-3 but missed the deadline by a day. I will keep this one and probable do a standard 5-7-5 version. Oliver
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2018 10:37:00 PM
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Nice Spring poem!
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/3/2018 2:02:00 AM
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Thank you Kim. After this past winter I am ready to mow grass:) Oliver

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