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Haiku 29 Wind Snow

wind snow – hard, cold, deep creaking trees, sagging power lines sheets warm next to you David Meade 11/14/2014

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Viv Wigley

Date: 10/14/2015 1:40:00 AM

Bleak and comforting. A lovely Haiku, David. Regards, Viv

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/20/2014 9:04:00 PM

Love the contrast, love the words, love the message, it is a beautiful poem.

David Meade
Date: 11/21/2014 8:06:00 PM

Thank-you Maurice -- may your sheets be filled with warmth and love always.

James Fraser

Date: 11/19/2014 3:40:00 PM

Fine Haiku David, cleverly crafted if I may say so, James :)

David Meade
Date: 11/21/2014 8:06:00 PM

Thank-you James -- here's to warm sheets!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/17/2014 12:21:00 AM

Excellent Haiku, dear David!

David Meade
Date: 11/21/2014 8:07:00 PM

Dear Friend, thank-you for your time -- warm sheets is indeed a blessing. All the best.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/15/2014 3:40:00 PM

Cold sheets of snow outside and warm sheets inside! two contrasting views...I think I'll stay inside! Well written, David! // paul

David Meade
Date: 11/15/2014 8:03:00 PM

You are a wise man -- let the young and foolish battle the cold and snow, us more mature men are for warmth and love!! All the best.

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/15/2014 9:58:00 AM

WOW! The Haiku king! Unfortunately, that's what we have to look forward to! Good write, David!

David Meade
Date: 11/15/2014 8:04:00 PM

Thank-you my friend, my your sheets always be warm!! Thank-you for the visit!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/15/2014 5:49:00 AM

sheets warm next to you wow.. and a cup of black coffee...welcome winter. Nice David, LOVE xxx rajat

David Meade
Date: 11/15/2014 8:04:00 PM

I like my strong and black -- your the best.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2014 12:27:00 AM

love that contrast. there is something so inviting about warm sheets when outside is freezing.

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/14/2014 8:38:00 PM

aww. there is nothing better than warm sheets, your words come real close to that warm cozy feeling

David Meade
Date: 11/14/2014 8:44:00 PM

I am still laughing about your poem . . . loved it!! Thank-you for you support . . . here's to single strings and warm sheets!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/14/2014 7:40:00 PM

Great third line! lines 1 & 2 to be more haiku you must pick 1 topic (snow covered power lines-outside our window buzz:warm sheets next to you) ( trees creak- with the weight of snow: you warm my sheets) Making any sense yet? Light & Love

David Meade
Date: 11/14/2014 8:02:00 PM

Yes, I think I may be getting what you are saying -- the first two line are the same related subject "wind snow" and what wind snow does . . . thus you saw it as two separate topics -- Non-haiku . . . I will need to work on this some more. Thank-you for your feedback.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/14/2014 3:10:00 PM

Oh, the imagery is amazing and I feel the chill and the need for the warm sheets tonight when freezing temperatures are expected:-)! Beautiful haiku - well written! Pandita

David Meade
Date: 11/14/2014 8:45:00 PM

Thank-you Ms. Sanchez . . . may your sheets always be warm! All the best.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/14/2014 3:07:00 PM

To be cuddled in warm sheets...romantic

Jan Allison

Date: 11/14/2014 9:11:00 AM

beautiful imagery David - love the comfort of the ending - hopefully we wont get snow this year and where I live on the Island we have very few overhead powerlines:-) Hugs jan x

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 2:44:00 AM

I live on the Isle of Man - a tiny little Island between England and Ireland - famous for the TT motorbike races and cats with no tails:-) Hugs Jan x

David Meade
Date: 11/14/2014 8:49:00 PM

I have been to the UK many times -- last Xmas we spent it in London and Edinburgh . . . loved the outdoor Christmas markets!! What area of the UK do you live? All the best and thank-you for all of your support.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/14/2014 8:48:00 AM

I really love this haiku Dave..The ending line offers warmth .

David Meade
Date: 11/14/2014 8:50:00 PM

You are the best and your encouragement is very precious to me . . . all the best.